I got to say, that was a dark fic, and I can't believe I actually began to read it (I prefer mushy, romantic SS fics) but it actually caught my attention, and I have to say, I am really glad I read it, since it is very nice written!!! It was dark, but it had a special something that I likedÂ
Congratulations!! I wish I could write stories like that!! You have to imagine the story and then put it in words, which I know it isn't easy.Â
Maybe I will traduce my only fic (it is in spanish) to english and tell you when I have it ready, so I can get advice on my writing!! (please?)Â
         Anyway, good story!!! Keep the good work!!Â