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JediRiff:
If you haven't met me in the forums (I'm pretty new :keke:), I like to draw and occasionally I get inspired to do something pretty cool. As I'm currently in obsession mode over Tsubasa I figured I'd make an ellaborate drawing of sorts. My idea is to make a picture showing Syaoran's perserverance and how his thoughts of Sakura encourage him to keep trying. The setting hasn't been decided on yet, nor the way I should implement Sakura into the picture (although I've had many ideas, the pose doesn't seem quite right: Thinking of a pose like how Aura looked in the .Hack//Sign series).
BUT I need some advice/critiques on this project  straight from Tsubasa fans. Right now I have this first piece of it done so check it out  :wink:

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b391/JediRiff/Willnotfailherpart1.jpg

xOLight_AngelOx:
it's very good

JediRiff:
Why thank you Angel ^^

and BTW to everyone: I hope it's fairly obvious who the character is. Surprisingly (or not so surprisingly) I've had a lot of people ask me who it is, or think it is an original character which kind of struck me like an aluminium baseball bat. It loses a lot of it's meaning without the character's personality and story which is really sad :( Hopefully when I post the final product everything will be understandable for fans and non-fans alike.

Cherry-chan:
Awesome. The drawing is actually really good (I can't draw anime AT ALL), but maybe you can make the hair... I dunno, a bit bigger/longer, as in the bangs. I don't know. Otherwise, it is very, very good.

Pikari:
I like the pose a lot. But if you're looking for suggestions, maybe raise his head a little to show his eyes, or one eye? The 'determined eyes' are kind of Syaoran's characteristic, that might help it look more 'determined' and not be mistaken for 'defeated' in that pose. *shrugs* Well, I don't know.. might be something to try. Depends on what else you put around it, also, I think.

What were you thinking, like two superimposed pictures of Sakura & Syaoran? Or like a collage-type thing?

In any case, I think the idea's cool. Look forward to seeing the end result.

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