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Any advice?
Tooya_Mizuki:
Nice drawing JediRiff :okay:
You should follow Pikari's advice on the head also, improve on the foot a bit :okay:.
JediRiff:
Thanks for the cookie Starfire! And thank you everyone for all the comments and advice ^^ I'll repost the image with the adjusted head and foot in awhile, and maybe I'll get Sakura added in there today as well (no promises on that though).
Saiyuki:
I really get the idea you are trying to show, but there are some more things you can improve, (including what everyone else) I think that the drawing is a bit too straight. You need to make them more curvy, more natural, but i think you have a lot of potential.
charcoalz:
hehe, it's good =]
JediRiff:
Ok here's the image with a few adjustments as well as Sakura.
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b391/JediRiff/Will-not-fail-her-part2-cop.gif
First off, Sakura's hair came out terribly. No excuse for it, so I will redraw it later. Same goes for the dress. But I wanted to get this portion out to show one of my ideas of how I was going to add Sakura. If this pose lasts till final production, Sakura will be faded to become more transparent, kind of like a memory or inspiration within Syaoran. Yay or nay it, I'd really like to hear what everyone thinks. I do have another idea that I like a lot but haven't gotten around to drawing yet as it could be a whole picture by itself, but if this pose for Sakura doesn't go over well I'll gladly give it a shot :okay:.
To Saiyuki--- Thanks, I thought my drawing seemed a tad stiff especially when it came to hair, but hopefully I'll get a better feel for it.
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