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augustserenade:
Sugoi! :keke: It's great, and the pose is awesome!! As for how to implement Sakura into the picture, I was thinking that you could put a picture of her holding her feather as the background. And Pikari's suggestion about his eyes is good too. ^^

Can't wait till it's finished! :wave:

JediRiff:

--- Quote from: hoshisenshi on September 16 2005, 01:26 pm ---Sugoi! :keke: It's great, and the pose is awesome!! As for how to implement Sakura into the picture, I was thinking that you could put a picture of her holding her feather as the background. And Pikari's suggestion about his eyes is good too. ^^

Can't wait till it's finished! :wave:

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Good point, although I dread the prospect of trying to seperate the fingers into recognizable shapes :haha: but I'll definately consider that thanks :)


--- Quote from: Pikari on September 16 2005, 01:04 pm ---I like the pose a lot. But if you're looking for suggestions, maybe raise his head a little to show his eyes, or one eye? The 'determined eyes' are kind of Syaoran's characteristic, that might help it look more 'determined' and not be mistaken for 'defeated' in that pose. *shrugs* Well, I don't know.. might be something to try. Depends on what else you put around it, also, I think.

What were you thinking, like two superimposed pictures of Sakura & Syaoran? Or like a collage-type thing?

In any case, I think the idea's cool. Look forward to seeing the end result.

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Wow, you pretty much struck what I was going for on the dot. I was intending him to seem a tad defeated for that's when real perserverance comes through, but your right that I might have gone overboard :sweatdrop: I really like your idea on the eyes; I'll try remaking it so his eyes are visible.
As for putting Sakura in there, I wasn't planning on superimposing, but something you said gave me a great idea. (I think it was between "Sakura" and "Syaoran". Maybe it was the &....) I'll test these things out, post the updated version up here and see what you think :)

Star:
Wowie!  It's really cool!  I like the showing the eyes a little idea though.   Methinks you'll get a cookie for such an awesome drawing.   I can't wait to see the end result!  :D

bLuetopaz:
erm.. i agree with Pikari-san.. improve on the head area and also the foot..

Alexiel:
Lol, I draw too!

I like the picture pose, but of course like anyone else, you can improve it. Like the hands... and like Pikari said, raise the head a bit to show an eye at least. And you can probably do something about the foot... looked kinda odd to me.

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