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Smile
« on: September 22 2005, 04:01 pm »
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Smile

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“You’re going to leave me. And..” She turned her head up and looked straight at his face. “and.. I don’t want you to.” Those last five words scared him and pleased him at the same time.
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Re: Smile
« Reply #1 on: September 22 2005, 05:00 pm »
Aww, it's a really nice story. I enjoyed it, and I like how you kept the characters' identities a secret until the end, while giving off little hints on who they are. I'm not even a fan of the couple, and I still enjoyed this story. =D Good job.

Verdict: 9/10.

That means you get a cookie. Too bad I can't hand them out. >.<
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Re: Smile
« Reply #2 on: September 24 2005, 02:49 pm »
aww.. :heart: thanks for the review~!  :XD:
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Re: Smile
« Reply #3 on: September 27 2005, 09:59 am »
Oh wow! I <3 this story a lot! It's so kawaii and sad at the same time~~~ Sugoi job, ani-san :okay:  *Please have a cookie :)*
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Re: Smile
« Reply #4 on: September 28 2005, 03:57 pm »
aww.. *heart* arigato Lexi-san for the cookie and kind comments about my story!
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Re: Smile
« Reply #5 on: October 02 2005, 04:44 am »
Well written and bittersweet. I loved it! ^__^
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Re: Smile
« Reply #6 on: October 03 2005, 08:18 pm »
thank you moonprincess-san! XD
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Re: Smile
« Reply #7 on: October 04 2005, 02:59 am »
just read your fanfic.. nicely written and sweet.. i really did not realised who the person was until i saw this sentence, "being the daughter of a highly successful business woman"...

i gave your story a rate of 4 out of 5 stars! keep up the good work! :okay:
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Re: Smile
« Reply #8 on: October 04 2005, 04:48 pm »
^^ hehe .. it was going to keep their identities unknown til the end .. but i decided to spoil it a bit .. ^^ arigato bluetopaz-san! :XD:
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Re: Smile
« Reply #9 on: October 05 2005, 12:08 am »
Quote from: ani on October 04 2005, 04:48 pm
^^ hehe .. it was going to keep their identities unknown til the end .. but i decided to spoil it a bit .. ^^ arigato bluetopaz-san! :XD:

you did a great job with it then.. or am i slow?  :keke:
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Re: Smile
« Reply #10 on: October 05 2005, 11:33 am »
Quote from: bLuetopaz on October 05 2005, 12:08 am
you did a great job with it then.. or am i slow? :keke:

^^;; no no .. you're not slow .. that was the part that should've given a character away ..
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Re: Smile
« Reply #11 on: October 05 2005, 07:38 pm »
Wow sugoi ne!!!
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Re: Smile
« Reply #12 on: October 08 2005, 03:28 pm »
^^ hehe .. arigato fye-[chan]san!
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