Topic: General Discussion (Read 24795 times)

D.J.P · « **on:** November 07 2005, 10:01 am »

This is the discussion thread for any stories posted here. Please read the rules aswell.
http://www.capturedwings.net/forums/index.php?topic=1816.0

Enjoy everyone.

Arcademan · « **Reply #1 on:** November 14 2005, 05:26 am »

Mizumi...

Nice work with your Chobits story. Looking good. I'll re-read it again but it's a good read

moezychan · « **Reply #2 on:** November 14 2005, 05:42 am »

I really like your Christmas story Arcademan! It's very well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Juny · « **Reply #3 on:** November 14 2005, 07:11 pm »

Mizumi-chan, I really love your story... you're too good at writing fics (and stop saying it's not true cuz I'll never finish the manga if you keep doing that...). I'm a little sick today so I won't be scanning the pages, but I hope I can do it tomorrow ^_^

Director of Music · « **Reply #4 on:** November 19 2005, 12:57 pm »

Eh ^^;; I wrote this story just to show another side of Seto...I had to pull a lot of strings on him though, man it took forever for him to approve

Arcademan · « **Reply #5 on:** November 23 2005, 02:42 pm »

Not familiar with the character or show but you're showing good writing skills. Keep up the good work

Arcademan · « **Reply #6 on:** December 09 2005, 12:56 pm »

Mark of the Covenant -Â Kasawa Lanford

Very good story. Keep up the great work

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #7 on:** December 09 2005, 01:57 pm »

Thanks

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #8 on:** December 13 2005, 11:05 am »

How does everyone think of the intro to "Mark of Bachi" ?

Director of Music · « **Reply #9 on:** December 14 2005, 09:27 am »

I think its awesome

What do you guys think of my story right now?

Arcademan · « **Reply #10 on:** December 14 2005, 11:11 am »

All of the current stories here are well done and well-written. The only true thing I find wrong with them is the fact more people aren't commenting on them. They don't know what they're missing

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #11 on:** December 14 2005, 03:03 pm »

Maybe SLI can make some sort of annoucement or something about these wonderful storys here, and how there missing such great writing

moezychan · « **Reply #12 on:** December 14 2005, 03:05 pm »

Sorry for not commenting. I have read all of you stories! Kasawa-kun, Arcademan-sama, and Director of Music's fanfics! They are all fantastic, and I love(d) them thoroughly! Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to more!

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #13 on:** December 14 2005, 04:20 pm »

if I was just able to draw better I could really make some of the events I write look better. But I can't

Robin Sena · « **Reply #14 on:** December 14 2005, 07:47 pm »

Mine is confusing as hell if you're not familiar on the series.

But it's okay.

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #15 on:** December 15 2005, 05:18 am »

It's a tad difficult to understand, but that helps really

Robin Sena · « **Reply #16 on:** December 16 2005, 01:14 am »

Well, if you have difficulties understanding it just follow the screen shots.

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #17 on:** December 16 2005, 04:24 pm »

Thats true

I have a question to those who read this thread.

As you've probably already noticed. My character, Kalshion, is.... quite old (I've had this character for ten years)

Anywho, does it offend you or bother you what type of disguise's he takes? (Age? Perhaps the fact he enrolls in a grade school to hide his Identity)

Also, I already have plans on starting up another story based solely on his children (Sharien mainly, who is seven years old) Do you want to see that story as well? (It's primarily a rated G story, since it will deal with her being in Kindergarden attending a school created by the Dragon Family)

Get back to me please

Robin Sena · « **Reply #18 on:** December 17 2005, 05:50 pm »

If you have spare time. Go for it.

As for mine, I have a hard time on mine.

Typical one...

Shoot enemies, save, die, load save, repeat.

Director of Music · « **Reply #19 on:** December 20 2005, 09:36 am »

I need more ideas on what the next chapter should be about

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