Topic: General Discussion (Read 24775 times)

D.J.P · « **on:** November 07 2005, 10:01 am »

This is the discussion thread for any stories posted here. Please read the rules aswell.
http://www.capturedwings.net/forums/index.php?topic=1816.0

Enjoy everyone.

Arcademan · « **Reply #1 on:** November 14 2005, 05:26 am »

Mizumi...

Nice work with your Chobits story. Looking good. I'll re-read it again but it's a good read

moezychan · « **Reply #2 on:** November 14 2005, 05:42 am »

I really like your Christmas story Arcademan! It's very well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Juny · « **Reply #3 on:** November 14 2005, 07:11 pm »

Mizumi-chan, I really love your story... you're too good at writing fics (and stop saying it's not true cuz I'll never finish the manga if you keep doing that...). I'm a little sick today so I won't be scanning the pages, but I hope I can do it tomorrow ^_^

Director of Music · « **Reply #4 on:** November 19 2005, 12:57 pm »

Eh ^^;; I wrote this story just to show another side of Seto...I had to pull a lot of strings on him though, man it took forever for him to approve

Arcademan · « **Reply #5 on:** November 23 2005, 02:42 pm »

Not familiar with the character or show but you're showing good writing skills. Keep up the good work

Arcademan · « **Reply #6 on:** December 09 2005, 12:56 pm »

Mark of the Covenant -Â Kasawa Lanford

Very good story. Keep up the great work

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #7 on:** December 09 2005, 01:57 pm »

Thanks

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #8 on:** December 13 2005, 11:05 am »

How does everyone think of the intro to "Mark of Bachi" ?

Director of Music · « **Reply #9 on:** December 14 2005, 09:27 am »

I think its awesome

What do you guys think of my story right now?

Arcademan · « **Reply #10 on:** December 14 2005, 11:11 am »

All of the current stories here are well done and well-written. The only true thing I find wrong with them is the fact more people aren't commenting on them. They don't know what they're missing

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #11 on:** December 14 2005, 03:03 pm »

Maybe SLI can make some sort of annoucement or something about these wonderful storys here, and how there missing such great writing

moezychan · « **Reply #12 on:** December 14 2005, 03:05 pm »

Sorry for not commenting. I have read all of you stories! Kasawa-kun, Arcademan-sama, and Director of Music's fanfics! They are all fantastic, and I love(d) them thoroughly! Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to more!

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #13 on:** December 14 2005, 04:20 pm »

if I was just able to draw better I could really make some of the events I write look better. But I can't

Robin Sena · « **Reply #14 on:** December 14 2005, 07:47 pm »

Mine is confusing as hell if you're not familiar on the series.

But it's okay.

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #15 on:** December 15 2005, 05:18 am »

It's a tad difficult to understand, but that helps really

Robin Sena · « **Reply #16 on:** December 16 2005, 01:14 am »

Well, if you have difficulties understanding it just follow the screen shots.

Kasawa Lanford · « **Reply #17 on:** December 16 2005, 04:24 pm »

Thats true

I have a question to those who read this thread.

As you've probably already noticed. My character, Kalshion, is.... quite old (I've had this character for ten years)

Anywho, does it offend you or bother you what type of disguise's he takes? (Age? Perhaps the fact he enrolls in a grade school to hide his Identity)

Also, I already have plans on starting up another story based solely on his children (Sharien mainly, who is seven years old) Do you want to see that story as well? (It's primarily a rated G story, since it will deal with her being in Kindergarden attending a school created by the Dragon Family)

Get back to me please

Robin Sena · « **Reply #18 on:** December 17 2005, 05:50 pm »

If you have spare time. Go for it.

As for mine, I have a hard time on mine.

Typical one...

Shoot enemies, save, die, load save, repeat.

Director of Music · « **Reply #19 on:** December 20 2005, 09:36 am »

I need more ideas on what the next chapter should be about

Tessaiga · « **Reply #20 on:** January 04 2006, 06:25 am »

Gotta give Robin Sena an applause for your Gradius fanfic! *applause*
I always die in that game, so perhaps now I get the chance to read what I'm missing!

It's unique, I havn't seen any Gradius fanfactions before... But then again, I don't read that much either... Uh...

monkey · « **Reply #21 on:** January 04 2006, 07:08 pm »

I was just browsing and I saw Robin Sena's Gradius and I actually started to read it (shock horror)
Its really Good. I especially like it Because it has visuals aswell.

Robin Sena · « **Reply #22 on:** January 05 2006, 03:45 pm »

Ehe, thanks guys!

It's hard not to die. God, Gradius III Arcade (current basis for the fanfic) is the hardest of the series.

Arcademan · « **Reply #23 on:** January 08 2006, 03:29 pm »

Robin...excellent work on your Gradius story and the screenshot visuals are a very nice touch

Director of Music · « **Reply #24 on:** January 15 2006, 10:58 am »

Well, I ended the first one. I figured if I continued, it wouldnt match the "boring day" title XD. So on to a new one XD

Arcademan · « **Reply #25 on:** January 15 2006, 11:11 am »

Cool. Look forward to reading more

Robin Sena · « **Reply #26 on:** January 15 2006, 10:27 pm »

Hmm... having difficulties.

I kept dying on Stage 3.

AHHHH!!!

Anyway, I'll add a new fanfic here soon.

Director of Music · « **Reply #27 on:** March 07 2006, 08:59 am »

argg cmon ppl i need some feedback here XD

Hikari B. · « **Reply #28 on:** March 28 2006, 12:22 pm »

Hmm... I hope my story's good. My first time posting a story in this board.

Director of Music · « **Reply #29 on:** May 30 2006, 12:38 pm »

hahaha man, i finally got time to post up another chapter. Enjoy! (id really appreciate it if you guys gave me feedback)

Hikari B. · « **Reply #30 on:** May 31 2006, 11:47 am »

Hmm... Not a lot of people are giving feedbacks here. >_> Did my fic scare them away? o_o

Fai · « **Reply #31 on:** May 31 2006, 11:54 am »

>.< I just posted a fanfic! Kyaa!

I like yours Hikari-san! It's so cute XD Funny too ^^ Good job.

Hikari B. · « **Reply #32 on:** July 15 2006, 04:20 am »

I shall not let the Fanfics board be ignored.

I've posted a Harvest Moon: More Friends of Mineral Town one-shot called Cookies. I'd appreciate it if someone read it and commented here. ^^ I can only assume that someone's reading it...

Rusty · « **Reply #33 on:** October 17 2006, 09:39 pm »

*falls off chair reading Kuro-puppy's fanfic.*... its so silly and funny and random!!!
hand over the next chap!!! XD

Kuro-puppy · « **Reply #34 on:** October 18 2006, 07:53 pm »

Quote from: Rusty on October 17 2006, 09:39 pm

*falls off chair reading Kuro-puppy's fanfic.*... its so silly and funny and random!!!
hand over the next chap!!! XD

glad you like it, i put up the 2nd chaptre

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