I will be completely honest with you, and say this so you are able to benefit from it. The music was good, and I liked the scenes, but the scenes didn't tie in with the music.
To simply show clips, and play music in the background is not a good amv. There are good points though. You did have good timing with the scenes, and I particularily liked them, but next time try to find a song that fits the scenes, or scenes that fit the song. For one of your first amv's, you did a good job, but you have room for improvement, and you can only get better! Keep at it, and you'll do a wonderful job! I'm sure of it!