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~Namine~:
ok, i looked all over this place for a thread where people can post their poetry, and if I put it here and there is already one please let me know xD but here is one of my most recent poems hopw you like it!!!

P.S. oh and I want everyone who writes poetry to us your work!!! I love meeting fellow poets ^^

Broken in Time

I have fallen, only took time
I contenplate the meaning
the reason for this pain
only to realize its my own mistakes
I continue to move backward
knowing not what I have lost
never knowing, never caring
what my mistakes would eventually cost
shadowed with the pain
I see myself broken
my soul shattering
untill I no longer realize
who and what I am
I fall deeper in the darkness
reaching for the light
he grabs my hand and pulls me through
my mind racing in all directions
I've come to understand my worthless soul
my sins hiding who I'm really meant to be
masking my heart and mind
my aura bringing upon darkness
to those i've come to despise
hatred within my heart
eating away at what i used to be
i feel as though I have no choice
I continue to fail and fall deeper
my broken wings giving no support
searching for God
looking for comfort
wanting to heal from all the pain
feeling it grow stronger
eachtime I reach forward
I see the light ahead of me
as part of my broken spirit
wanting so much more
accepting the pain and sinful nature
my selfish desire to belong
finding the one to help me through
I continue to search
and bring my soul to know peace
as I try to mend the pain
the pain my heart has come to realize
only broken in time.

wishingstarx:
:keke: Wow, Starpheonix-chan, you're poetry is awesome! Very deep... Umm... I like to write poetry, too, umm....   :sweatdrop: I'll post it later...

monkey:
bah, I tried to comment earlier but my PC died on me :(

Anyway, I was saying, I really liked it!
I don't normally read poems but sometimes I do feel like it and I do like yours, Although admittidly it is rather sad but what I like about it, Is to me I can see some hope in there aswell.
I like how it's written too, there are a few grammatical errors, but they don't show easily. Good Job :D

I did two pieces of Poetry (Only one of them I like) but I wrote them last year.

~Namine~:
oh wow thank you both for the comment ^^ hehe here is another one I wrote, most of them revovle around my feelings, not really othe people but here it is!! oh and I have a ton more, i write poetry all the time so let me know if you want me to post some of my others ^^

“Shadowed Emotions”

You push me away
Blocking how I feel for you
Ignoring how and what I do
You say you care for me
And will be by my side
But yet you push me away
Your emotions are what you hide

I continue to struggle
With everything I am
Only wishing I could end this pain
Wanting you near me
Side by side
As one, just you and I

I want to let you go
Forever burdened with the love I feel
My emotions hurting others
I look forward to the future
In hopes that we could someday
Follow the same path
Walk together hand in hand

But I continue to think
Maybe my selfish desire
Would only cause pain for others
Including the one I love
So I've made up my mind
To walk by your side
And support you through the hard times

Even if we are not one
Just being your friend is worth the pain
I don’t want to lose you in the end
Never wanting us to part
And lead separate lives.

wishingstarx:
I really like your poetry, Starpheonix-chan! You should write a book!�  � :keke: I would like to see your other ones...
�  :sweatdrop: I'm working on one now for a school project, when I finish it, I'll post it here....
It's titled "As Time Goes By..."

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