Topic: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D (Read 19686 times)

Kuri-san · « **Reply #20 on:** April 28 2006, 11:38 am »

hmm.. you are a good poem reader. I *bow* shall respect you.

it really one in the thousand whom can really appriciate poem, really.. just like The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost. this poem looked meaningless when harshly see.. but in the inner poem, there got a point in your Life-decision.

~Namine~ · « **Reply #21 on:** April 28 2006, 11:42 am »

yes I agree ^^ I only wish more critics would see it that way, i got in a big fight with a 30 year old woman on dA www.deviantart.com about how she was going about being a critic all wrong -. - adults ::sighs::

Kuri-san · « **Reply #22 on:** April 28 2006, 11:45 am »

hihi

don't mind that. may think them is among the ignorances in Poetry

moezychan · « **Reply #23 on:** April 28 2006, 11:53 am »

Here's one of my poems; it's pretty old:

Invisible:

She walks the crowded streets
And yet no one sees her
A lonely girl that the world forgot

Wanting to be seen
And wanting to be ignored
All in the same moment

Carrying her invisible burden
Upon her fragile back
Gathering strength

Though it seems hopeless
A question she repeats,
"Will I ever be seen?"

I wrote this poem back when I was fighting depression.

~Namine~ · « **Reply #24 on:** April 28 2006, 11:54 am »

awww I really like it!!! that is how I feel sometimes it can relate to most of us, very nice job!!!

Kuri-san · « **Reply #25 on:** April 28 2006, 11:55 am »

Woah, Â

nice poem too moezy-chan. it really a good point inside that.

charcoalz · « **Reply #26 on:** April 28 2006, 01:06 pm »

woww...they're all really good...
xD the poems i make are usually limericks..looool.

Once there was a girl named clover
who really liked to play red rover
she played by herself
with her good friend, the shelf
and then she got splinters all over.

ahahaha....:

Hack · « **Reply #27 on:** April 28 2006, 01:19 pm »

in matter of life and death
we always fear
of many dangers near
we live for life
we die of death
and we shoutÂ "why?"

nah, mine doesn't really make sense but it's about why people live

;;
p.s. wow , you guys'Â are amazing

Kuri-san · « **Reply #28 on:** April 28 2006, 01:41 pm »

haha...

please dont mind that. I really appriciate any poem, even its short or long.. hihi..

hack.<3.fly, your's poem not bad at all.. ^^ trust me.. I also a poem reader. and to charcoalz, your's not bad either. ^^ haha... I really looking forward to copy all of this maded poem..

Hack · « **Reply #29 on:** April 28 2006, 01:45 pm »

arigatou lightdecentant-san
i really love urs too
since im all- poems reader ^^;;

Kuri-san · « **Reply #30 on:** April 28 2006, 01:48 pm »

haha... needless to say thanks to me. because I also need someone to gives idea about some changes in my Poem.. my poem is just a scratch. so a lot of wrong spelling or vocabulary...

Tenkuuken · « **Reply #31 on:** April 28 2006, 08:57 pm »

Here's another poem I made in college, during an early morning class. My university, by the way, sits on top of part of a mountain, so...

Mist

I enveloped the universe in my arms
Amidst the cold rainy morning.
I sought warmth in the freezing wind
And got drenched in the rain
As I brood over the screams of nature.
The songs keep ringing in my head,
Songs that anger the heavens
And summon torrents of rain.
Little that I realized
That I am not alone,
For the wind longs for me
And the rain welcomes my presence.
Heaven slowly throws its blanket on me
And only then did I realize
That the universe has enveloped me in its arms.

Kuri-san · « **Reply #32 on:** April 28 2006, 09:02 pm »

whoa..

pretty nice your poem.. no wander it was an University level..

~Namine~ · « **Reply #33 on:** April 28 2006, 11:00 pm »

awww very nice!!! hehe and i especially like the limericks you guys put up ^^ they are quite funny xD

Tenkuuken · « **Reply #34 on:** April 28 2006, 11:20 pm »

I feel inspired all over again! I'd like to write more poems...

Kuri-san · « **Reply #35 on:** April 28 2006, 11:40 pm »

haha

I really looking forward to it..^^

charcoalz · « **Reply #36 on:** April 29 2006, 09:11 am »

Tenkouken, that is really good xD
and kuri-san, arigatou! =)

~Namine~ · « **Reply #37 on:** April 29 2006, 09:26 am »

yes everyone here is very good ima write some more too ^^

moezychan · « **Reply #38 on:** April 29 2006, 09:32 am »

Here's another one of my older poems. I'm going to post one a day in chronological order starting from oldest to newest:

Jealousy

Her anger arises
Everytime they're together

She claims to be happy
But then why does she cry?

It's hard to contain all these emotions
But she'll do it anyways

It's all she knows
And it's all she lives for

She doesn't understand
And doubts she ever will

Kuri-san · « **Reply #39 on:** April 29 2006, 09:51 am »

haha

all are pretty good in poem, <highlighting the poem and copy paste on notebook>

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