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Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
Kuri-san:
hmm.. you are a good poem reader. I *bow* shall respect you. :noteworthy: it really one in the thousand whom can really appriciate poem, really.. just like The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost. this poem looked meaningless when harshly see.. but in the inner poem, there got a point in your Life-decision.
~Namine~:
yes I agree ^^ I only wish more critics would see it that way, i got in a big fight with a 30 year old woman on dA www.deviantart.com about how she was going about being a critic all wrong -. - adults ::sighs::
Kuri-san:
hihi :D don't mind that. may think them is among the ignorances in Poetry
moezychan:
Here's one of my poems; it's pretty old:
Invisible:
She walks the crowded streets
And yet no one sees her
A lonely girl that the world forgot
Wanting to be seen
And wanting to be ignored
All in the same moment
Carrying her invisible burden
Upon her fragile back
Gathering strength
Though it seems hopeless
A question she repeats,
"Will I ever be seen?"
I wrote this poem back when I was fighting depression.
~Namine~:
awww I really like it!!! that is how I feel sometimes it can relate to most of us, very nice job!!!
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