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Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
Ashlee:
Nay, I hated the guy. I was just saying I like him to her, but really, he was a pain in the a**. I mean he broke up with her, and said "I though it was right at the time", he block her from msn and everthing. then I told her that he was on, and she said he is not, he not on mine. So, then he unblock her, and said, "There was too many people on my msn. so I had to block some people". He was a big a**
Cherry-chan:
Ex boyfriends are perfect for writing good poems and songs. A lot of music artists write their lyrics after a break-up :D Beautiful poem, though, Ashlee.
Best Friends
A smile, a promise,
someone I wanted to hold and kiss,
is my best friend, ever so true,
unknowing of my feelings, I wonder if he loves me too.
A hesitation, then I confess,
I think I've made our relationship a mess,
as he walks away from me, shaking his head,
I don't think I will see him again.
Here's another poem. It's about a girl who secretly loves her best friend, but when she tells him, she finds out he doesn't return her feelings. And he leaves, because he thinks she's a weirdo or something. I dunno, it came from the top of my head.
Ashlee:
Here is one that I have made. Now to warn you, I suc* at making poems. So please, be nice:
All I am
I am strong, but I am weak,
I'm loved, but I am hated,
I am smart, but I am dumb,
I have friends, but they are not true,
I have a heart, but it's turning blue,
I feel as though I will never know,
If this is all I am
Cherry-chan:
I like the poem, Ashlee! It's very well said :D
Tenkuuken:
--- Quote from: Ashlee on April 30 2006, 10:02 am ---Here is one that I have made. Now to warn you, I suc* at making poems. So please, be nice:
All I am
I am strong, but I am weak,
I'm loved, but I am hated,
I am smart, but I am dumb,
I have friends, but they are not true,
I have a heart, but it's turning blue,
I feel as though I will never know,
If this is all I am
--- End quote ---
Yup, it's very simple but the description of the self is very well-expressed.
I wish more would post their poems and other literary works soon.
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