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Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
~Namine~:
ok this poem is based off a drawing found here http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/29578358/
let me know what you think ^____^
"After the Rain"
when the rain falls
I shelter my emotions underneath
not wanting, not hearing
the wispers of love's calls
sheltered by my unknowing
hiding who I am
sharing only what I allow
pulling fourth what i'm not
I reached for you
shining so bright within my heart
compassion overwhelming my soul
not wanting or letting us fall apart
the rain slowly stops
showing me a wonderful reality
visions of what is meant to be
playing before my mind
compressing my hatred and desire
now showing our emotionless vitality
feeling it slowly fade down my cheek
the cool feeling of the breeze
I now realize what its like to feel
wanting more and more
the consequences of my past life
begin to fall deeper and deeper
within those dark places
I no longer wish to reach for
glancing ahead to my future
watching you pull me through
my soul now shining bright
as I face my new life with you
wanting so much more
than what i've gained or lost
thinking of my past
and what my future would cost
I'm slowly crawling through
breaking the barrier of my sinful nature
holding my emotions high
I try to overcome this darkend fear
noticing what its like
feeling the mood of what i've come to know
lonelieness in all its spite
I notice the good and accepting
as I realize my path
much clearer than before
only after the rain falls
Ashlee:
Once again namine. Its great. ^_^
moezychan:
Here's my next poem; I never titled it.
At times, I find myself drifting
Out at sea, where no one can find me
Some days the wind is gracious
It carries me away to a distant island
Where I can finally be on solid ground
Other days, It is mean and unforgiving
Blasting storms and harsh winds
It's days like these when I wonder
Wonder if I should just fight back
Or allow the wind to carry me off
Where noone will ever find me
The wind has also been known to toy with me
It'll carry me off to the island, but drifting
Back to the sea
These are the days that are most frustrating
I wonder, Will I ever make it
To that distant island?
Or be doomed, to drift for eternity
This poem represents life and each element symblizes something. I'll leave it to you what they symbolize.
Ashlee:
moezy-chan, that is so good. I know how its feels in the poem. Its really good ^_^
moezychan:
Arigatou. It's my favorite actually. That poem really helped me get my emotions out.
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