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Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
Ashlee:
--- Quote from: moezy-chan on May 18 2006, 01:54 am ---Arigatou. It's my favorite actually. That poem really helped me get my emotions out.
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I know how you feel. I posted this one earlier, but its kind of how I felt at the moment, well alot latey. Lets just say. There is alot going on between me and my family. I don't agree with what they are dinog. And I feel like a outcast.
Am I all alone
the darkness is coming closer and the light is fading away,
nothing can go on but the fear in my heart,
can any one see me, can any one hear me,
I guess I'm all-alone
wishingstarx:
--- Quote from: moezy-chan on May 17 2006, 12:11 pm ---Here's my next poem; I never titled it.
At times, I find myself drifting
Out at sea, where no one can find me
Some days the wind is gracious
It carries me away to a distant island
Where I can finally be on solid ground
Other days, It is mean and unforgiving
Blasting storms and harsh winds
It's days like these when I wonder
Wonder if I should just fight back
Or allow the wind to carry me off
Where noone will ever find me
The wind has also been known to toy with me
It'll carry me off to the island, but drifting
Back to the sea
These are the days that are most frustrating
I wonder, Will I ever make it
To that distant island?
Or be doomed, to drift for eternity
This poem represents life and each element symblizes something. I'll leave it to you what they symbolize.
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I really like this poem, moezy-chan... It's very deep... And I feel that way sometimes...
--- Quote from: Kairi on May 18 2006, 02:21 am ---I know how you feel. I posted this one earlier, but its kind of how I felt at the moment, well alot latey. Lets just say. There is alot going on between me and my family. I don't agree with what they are dinog. And I feel like a outcast.
Am I all alone
the darkness is coming closer and the light is fading away,
nothing can go on but the fear in my heart,
can any one see me, can any one hear me,
I guess I'm all-alone
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I like your poem, too, onee-san... I can relate to this one as well... ^_^
Tenkuuken:
I feel like I'm starting to lose my touch as far is writing or even deep thinking is concerned ....
Anyway I'm trying out what my teachers called form poetry....
Over A Cup of Coffee
Wake me up, wake me up, turn my
sleepiness into angst, turn your caffeine
spirit into the wraiths of the mind. Show
me how the heart beats fast through the
mixture of warmth and anger Keep me alive and
well, and aware of my existence. Give me no
sleep, awaken in me my slumbering powers,
as you keep your powers in your dark warm
sea. Let’s make ourselves comfortable, let’s
sit and talk awhile. You are restless, I am
wild; I feed on your warmth, you feed on
my mind. Ah, it feels good to be so
comforted. Join me, sit down. Wake me
up, wake me up, wake me up.
Mizumi:
Everyone's poetry here is so lovely! I really enjoyed reading it - if it was published in a book, it'd be the first poetry I'd buy for sure. Keep writing, all of you!
And here comes my crap... ^^;
This one's one of my latest ones, but I bet there are grammatical errors in it anyway. It was kinda written as song lyrics for some character in a story I never really started... Hm.
Pure and all-knowing
It seems like my heart is cheating me;
It says I’m feeling better than before,
The time you were still with me, but
You left me filled with emptiness
Was it all just a simple lie?
The arms you wrapped around me
A simple comforting phrase
Whispered in my ear?
My heart has grown wings
It fled from my body
I’m finally able to see the truth
I’m empty, I’m pure
I’m all-knowing
I was dragged along by feelings
Feelings I can’t trust, I know now
My heart stopped thinking
I rushed to be with you
I reached you at once
Then I stumbled over
Fell head over heels
And realized how you
Really were.
You left me without thinking
What you’d do to my heart
How my heart would be crunched,
Fold together like a piece of paper
With meaningless words.
My fled heart learnt this;
I know your silence
Meant more than words
Spoken in a moment
Of complete darkness.
How could I believe your words?
Everything you ever said
Was more than just a lie
It was like you had already torn
My heart apart with them.
My body is like an empty shell
My soul was torn out of it
Long before I realized it was gone
I already felt I was empty inside
Pure and all-knowing
Purity was in my heart
Even though it has gone
Purity has remained in me
And I know everything
How you betrayed me
Cheated on me
Left me in the end
And tore my heart away.
Your leaving has left one thing
Now I’m pure and all-knowing.
Tenkuuken:
^ Aw, don't worry... Grammar isn't really checked in poetry, especially if you're doing freeverse.
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