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Re: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
« Reply #40 on: April 30 2006, 08:44 am »
Standing alone, in the pouring rain,
her heart quickens and feels pain
she closes her eyes and whispers his name,
will she ever love like this again?
it was over and done,
even before she started to run,
with the necklace clutched tightly to her chest,
fate had taken care of all the rest.
She felt the swift movement of someone behind her,
turning around, she softly smiled.

This poem in untitled, but I really like it. It was inspired by an unfinished story my sister wrote. I have a lot more ideas for poems, so I'll probably be posting here a lot. My cousin tells me to write one-shots and drabbles when I have writer's block, but I think poems are much easier and efficient for me. :D
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Re: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
« Reply #41 on: April 30 2006, 08:48 am »
I really like that poem cherry-chan. I'm not good at poems. I never did well in that part of english class. My friend loves poems though. She is a nut when it comes to it. Not me though. Here is one of her favorite ones

A Love Like No Other

I never felt a love like this before
It’s a love like no other
Something I have always hoped for
A love with friendship
Humour and heart
A bond so strong
It would never part
A love that makes you smile
From ear to ear
A love that is joyful
Without any fear
A love that is beautiful
From the inside out
A love with no tears
Pain, or doubt
A love with soul
So tender and true
A love I have found
Only in you.
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« Reply #42 on: April 30 2006, 09:22 am »
oh my!! thats a very lovely poem cherry-chan ^^
and your poem ashlee is wonderful, its how I feel about someone, its perfect!!!
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« Reply #43 on: April 30 2006, 09:25 am »
Oh no. My friend made it. She made it after she started dating her bf, which is now ex bf.
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« Reply #44 on: April 30 2006, 09:42 am »
awww i"m sorry to hear that :(
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« Reply #45 on: April 30 2006, 09:46 am »
Nay, I hated the guy. I was just saying I like him to her, but really, he was a pain in the a**. I mean he broke up with her, and said "I though it was right at the time", he block her from msn and everthing. then I told her that he was on, and she said he is not, he not on mine. So, then he unblock her, and said, "There was too many people on my msn. so I had to block some people". He was a big a**
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Re: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
« Reply #46 on: April 30 2006, 09:51 am »
Ex boyfriends are perfect for writing good poems and songs. A lot of music artists write their lyrics after a break-up :D Beautiful poem, though, Ashlee.

Best Friends

A smile, a promise,
someone I wanted to hold and kiss,
is my best friend, ever so true,
unknowing of my feelings, I wonder if he loves me too.
A hesitation, then I confess,
I think I've made our relationship a mess,
as he walks away from me, shaking his head,
I don't think I will see him again.

Here's another poem. It's about a girl who secretly loves her best friend, but when she tells him, she finds out he doesn't return her feelings. And he leaves, because he thinks she's a weirdo or something. I dunno, it came from the top of my head.
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« Reply #47 on: April 30 2006, 10:02 am »
Here is one that I have made. Now to warn you, I suc* at making poems. So please, be nice:
All I am
I am strong, but I am weak,
I'm loved, but I am hated,
I am smart, but I am dumb,
I have friends, but they are not true,
I have a heart, but it's turning blue,
I feel as though I will never know,
If this is all I am
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Re: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
« Reply #48 on: April 30 2006, 10:41 am »
I like the poem, Ashlee! It's very well said :D
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« Reply #49 on: May 01 2006, 10:29 am »
Here is one that I have made. Now to warn you, I suc* at making poems. So please, be nice:
All I am
I am strong, but I am weak,
I'm loved, but I am hated,
I am smart, but I am dumb,
I have friends, but they are not true,
I have a heart, but it's turning blue,
I feel as though I will never know,
If this is all I am

Yup, it's very simple but the description of the self is very well-expressed.

I wish more would post their poems and other literary works soon.

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« Reply #50 on: May 10 2006, 01:54 am »
ok here is a new poem i came up with, i dedicated it to Josh the love of my life ^^ please be critical and let me know what you think!!! <3

"Like no Other"
(Dedicated to Josh Goodspeed)

You reached for me
Pulled me from the dark
Showed me love and compassion
Set free my soul and heart

Our separate paths
Now moving one direction
Hoping to conform one day
Offering our soul’s protection

I love the way you smile
The way you touch my face
The way you kiss my cheek softly
The way you hold me with such grace

Everything about you
So perfect in every way
The words all mixed up in my heart
Not knowing how or what to say

I love you like no other
More than words can say
I think of you and smile
Loving each and every day
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« Reply #51 on: May 10 2006, 02:26 am »
~Namine~  I love that poem. Its so sweet. You must really like this guy josh.
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« Reply #52 on: May 10 2006, 02:29 am »
~Namine~ I love that poem. Its so sweet. You must really like this guy josh.

Yeah I do I think i'm in love with him ^^
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this one is of him and his dad he's the one on the left ^^


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« Reply #53 on: May 10 2006, 02:32 am »
I'm happy for both of you. ^_^ I wish I had a guy like him. But my love life suc*s
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« Reply #54 on: May 10 2006, 02:34 am »
I'm happy for both of you. ^_^ I wish I had a guy like him. But my love life suc*s

you'll find someone sissy ^^ they are just going to fall into your lap oneday and its going to be awesome!!! i went through a lot of hard relationships and memorys but he bypasses them all he's perfect in every way!! ^^

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« Reply #55 on: May 10 2006, 02:37 am »
you'll find someone sissy ^^ they are just going to fall into your lap oneday and its going to be awesome!!! i went through a lot of hard relationships and memorys but he bypasses them all he's perfect in every way!! ^^

::huggles her sissy close::
*hugs her back* Thanks big sis

Here is a poem, that I wrote. I wrote it a long time ago, so I was very young. It has to deal with my family. I'm more of a black sheep to them. But my mom does understand but not all of it. If you are wondering, my parents are divorce (over 7 years), and they just love my younger brothers a bit more then me.

Am I all alone

the darkness is coming closer and the light is fading away,
nothing can go on but the fear in my heart,
can any one see me, can any one hear me,
I guess I'm all-alone
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« Reply #56 on: May 10 2006, 02:40 am »
awww lil'sis its ok, I've been through some hard times too but you know what if you keep your head up and your heart strong you'll get through it, and when you do finally find someone you love they will help you too, in a lot of ways you dont know yet, you can make it!!!

oh and very nice poem ::claps::
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« Reply #57 on: May 10 2006, 02:48 am »
*blushes* thank-you

I know that life offers so much more. My  past only made me stronger, or weaker, I don't know yet, I have to see ^_^
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« Reply #58 on: May 12 2006, 10:13 pm »
ok heres a poem I wrote for my love Josh ^^

  "Like no Other"
(Dedicated to Josh Goodspeed)

You reached for me
Pulled me from the dark
Showed me love and compassion
Set free my soul and heart

Our separate paths
Now moving one direction
Hoping to conform one day
Offering our soul’s protection

I love the way you smile
The way you touch my face
The way you kiss my cheek softly
The way you hold me with such grace

Everything about you
So perfect in every way
The words all mixed up in my heart
Not knowing how or what to say

I love you like no other
More than words can say
I think of you and smile
Loving each and every day
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« Reply #59 on: May 16 2006, 06:46 am »
Good job little sis. I love it ^_^

Where here is another one I did. Just now. It sucks, ya I know, but I hope you get a couple of laughs from it, lol
Computer Screen

I'm sitting in front of this open screen
with nothing to do, but type.
Why I am here?
Why are you there?
little questions that goes though my mind.

My heart drop when you are not online,
and pops right back when you are on
Come to me, come and see,
and I will show you who I really am.
Why are you there, when I'm right here?
Oh please, oh please talk to me.
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