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Re: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
« Reply #60 on: May 16 2006, 12:45 pm »
Here's a random thought....

Writing Poetry On An Empty Stomach

Hungry.
No food in the ref
Or even at the cupboard.
Forgot to eat my meals.
Nothing much to eat around.
I scavenge around for a decent meal,
But ouch, no money.
What to do?
I sit before the monitor
Waiting, waiting, waiting.

Still hungry.
Getting cranky and hollow
And brain-dead by the minute.
Tomorrow, hard day,
Might end up surviving with no food.
Now I have to stay awake
And think of something
Before my stomach kills me.
I still sit before the monitor
Waiting, waiting, waiting.

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Re: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
« Reply #61 on: May 16 2006, 12:54 pm »
Hm...I don't think this would count as fanart, but I have a Tsubasa poem I wrote a long time ago by my rainy window pane and I really like it.

Wait a Bit For Me
I sit by a darkened window
A star flits by in the evening sky, but I make no wish.
Because though the window becomes a prison for me, someday...!
I'll stretch my memories out to you and we'll fly away, away.
I hope you'll wait a bit for me, because I've longed for so long to say those three words.
I. Love. You.
But raindrops fall, and salt scented wind blows my dreams back and forth.
But I'll wait a bit for it to calm.
Oh, that I could remember now, those three words.
You look so expectant, so warm.
Who. Are. You?
I shed a single raindrop soaked tear, and my window grows darker still.
Are you still waiting for me? I will. Always.
Oh, those three words. I know, know I love you.
I. Miss. You.
But can you wait a bit for me?

Everyone else does such good poems...-sigh-  I really liked it though, so I had to put it up.
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Re: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
« Reply #62 on: May 16 2006, 01:16 pm »
this one i wrote for mother's day:

your love
when i'm sad
when i'm lonly
you came to me and
spoke softly to me
you hugged me,
and tucked me to bed
i love you, mother,
i need you, everyday,
thank you God,
thank you mom
for giving me the most precious gift
your love.
by me.

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Re: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
« Reply #63 on: May 16 2006, 01:25 pm »
Let me give everyone a heads up, if its orignal poetry, not from Anime or another Movie poetry, do be wise that people will still your work, I am a published in many books and would like to tell people about this, and since this is a poems board, I will give a published one I did awhile back.

Day

As the nigth goes by, With the dimonds in the sky,
The Moon sets, The Sun rises,
The Day is already at depth,
Time goes by, With out a care,
The day is done, All is fare.

Its from memory, so it might be off a bit.
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« Reply #64 on: May 16 2006, 09:40 pm »
they are so good, guys ^_^ alot better then my *points on another page*
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« Reply #65 on: May 17 2006, 03:38 am »
ok this poem is based off a drawing found here http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/29578358/
let me know what you think ^____^

"After the Rain"

when the rain falls
I shelter my emotions underneath
not wanting, not hearing
the wispers of love's calls

sheltered by my unknowing
hiding who I am
sharing only what I allow
pulling fourth what i'm not

I reached for you
shining so bright within my heart
compassion overwhelming my soul
not wanting or letting us fall apart

the rain slowly stops
showing me a wonderful reality
visions of what is meant to be
playing before my mind
compressing my hatred and desire
now showing our emotionless vitality

feeling it slowly fade down my cheek
the cool feeling of the breeze
I now realize what its like to feel
wanting more and more

the consequences of my past life
begin to fall deeper and deeper
within those dark places
I no longer wish to reach for

glancing ahead to my future
watching you pull me through
my soul now shining bright
as I face my new life with you

wanting so much more
than what i've gained or lost
thinking of my past
and what my future would cost

I'm slowly crawling through
breaking the barrier of my sinful nature
holding my emotions high
I try to overcome this darkend fear

noticing what its like
feeling the mood of what i've come to know
lonelieness in all its spite
I notice the good and accepting

as I realize my path
much clearer than before
only after the rain falls
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« Reply #66 on: May 17 2006, 11:52 am »
Once again namine. Its great. ^_^
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« Reply #67 on: May 17 2006, 12:11 pm »
Here's my next poem; I never titled it.

At times, I find myself drifting
Out at sea, where no one can find me
Some days the wind is gracious

It carries me away to a distant island
Where I can finally be on solid ground

Other days, It is mean and unforgiving
Blasting storms and harsh winds

It's days like these when I wonder
Wonder if I should just fight back
Or allow the wind to carry me off
Where noone will ever find me

The wind has also been known to toy with me
It'll carry me off to the island, but drifting
Back to the sea
These are the days that are most frustrating

I wonder, Will I ever make it
To that distant island?
Or be doomed, to drift for eternity

This poem represents life and each element symblizes something. I'll leave it to you what they symbolize.

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« Reply #68 on: May 17 2006, 11:16 pm »
moezy-chan, that is so good. I know how its feels in the poem. Its really good ^_^
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« Reply #69 on: May 18 2006, 01:54 am »
Arigatou. It's my favorite actually. That poem really helped me get my emotions out.

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« Reply #70 on: May 18 2006, 02:21 am »
Arigatou. It's my favorite actually. That poem really helped me get my emotions out.
I know how you feel. I posted this one earlier, but its kind of how I felt at the moment, well alot latey.  Lets just say. There is alot going on between me and my family. I don't agree with what they are dinog. And I feel like a outcast.
Am I all alone
the darkness is coming closer and the light is fading away,
nothing can go on but the fear in my heart,
can any one see me, can any one hear me,
I guess I'm all-alone
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« Reply #71 on: May 18 2006, 07:48 am »
Here's my next poem; I never titled it.

At times, I find myself drifting
Out at sea, where no one can find me
Some days the wind is gracious

It carries me away to a distant island
Where I can finally be on solid ground

Other days, It is mean and unforgiving
Blasting storms and harsh winds

It's days like these when I wonder
Wonder if I should just fight back
Or allow the wind to carry me off
Where noone will ever find me

The wind has also been known to toy with me
It'll carry me off to the island, but drifting
Back to the sea
These are the days that are most frustrating

I wonder, Will I ever make it
To that distant island?
Or be doomed, to drift for eternity

This poem represents life and each element symblizes something. I'll leave it to you what they symbolize.
I really like this poem, moezy-chan... It's very deep... And I feel that way sometimes...
I know how you feel. I posted this one earlier, but its kind of how I felt at the moment, well alot latey.  Lets just say. There is alot going on between me and my family. I don't agree with what they are dinog. And I feel like a outcast.
Am I all alone
the darkness is coming closer and the light is fading away,
nothing can go on but the fear in my heart,
can any one see me, can any one hear me,
I guess I'm all-alone
I like your poem, too, onee-san... I can relate to this one as well... ^_^
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« Reply #72 on: May 18 2006, 11:24 am »
I feel like I'm starting to lose my touch as far is writing or even deep thinking is concerned ....

Anyway I'm trying out what my teachers called form poetry....

                                   Over A Cup of Coffee

                         Wake me up,      wake me up,    turn my
                         sleepiness into angst, turn your caffeine
                         spirit into the wraiths of the mind. Show
                         me   how   the   heart  beats   fast   through  the
                         mixture of warmth and anger   Keep me  alive  and
                         well,  and  aware  of  my existence. Give      me no
                         sleep,       awaken in me my  slumbering      powers,
                         as  you  keep  your  powers in your dark      warm
                         sea.   Let’s make ourselves  comfortable,      let’s
                         sit   and   talk   awhile.   You are restless,  I am
                         wild;   I  feed  on  your  warmth,  you feed on
                         my  mind.   Ah,  it  feels  good  to  be so
                         comforted.  Join me, sit down. Wake me
                              up, wake me up, wake me up.

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« Reply #73 on: May 22 2006, 03:50 am »
Everyone's poetry here is so lovely! I really enjoyed reading it - if it was published in a book, it'd be the first poetry I'd buy for sure. Keep writing, all of you!

And here comes my crap... ^^;
This one's one of my latest ones, but I bet there are grammatical errors in it anyway. It was kinda written as song lyrics for some character in a story I never really started... Hm.

Pure and all-knowing

It seems like my heart is cheating me;
It says I’m feeling better than before,
The time you were still with me, but
You left me filled with emptiness

Was it all just a simple lie?
The arms you wrapped around me
A simple comforting phrase
Whispered in my ear?

My heart has grown wings
It fled from my body
I’m finally able to see the truth
I’m empty, I’m pure
I’m all-knowing

I was dragged along by feelings
Feelings I can’t trust, I know now
My heart stopped thinking
I rushed to be with you

I reached you at once
Then I stumbled over
Fell head over heels
And realized how you
Really were.

You left me without thinking
What you’d do to my heart
How my heart would be crunched,
Fold together like a piece of paper
With meaningless words.

My fled heart learnt this;
I know your silence
Meant more than words
Spoken in a moment
Of complete darkness.

How could I believe your words?
Everything you ever said
Was more than just a lie
It was like you had already torn
My heart apart with them.

My body is like an empty shell
My soul was torn out of it
Long before I realized it was gone
I already felt I was empty inside
Pure and all-knowing

Purity was in my heart
Even though it has gone
Purity has remained in me
And I know everything

How you betrayed me
Cheated on me
Left me in the end
And tore my heart away.

Your leaving has left one thing
Now I’m pure and all-knowing.
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« Reply #74 on: May 24 2006, 03:32 am »
^ Aw, don't worry... Grammar isn't really checked in poetry, especially if you're doing freeverse.

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« Reply #75 on: May 25 2006, 07:06 am »
Wrote a poem yesterday. I've had an onslaught of depression lately and from angst comes inspiration:

Myself

Often I wonder
What causes failure?
Why do people fail others?
And why do they not mind?

Is it from lack of emotion? Concern?
Or do they even know?
Are people so afraid of others?
That they insist on hurting them?

My belief is…
We need to be alone
We push away
So we can think of ourselves
And in that, we find comfort

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« Reply #76 on: May 25 2006, 11:43 pm »
haha... it really been a while i didnt login in CWF and yet the number of the poetry are getting more..

**Can i take you all poem to published in my school magazine? i promise i'll writes all of ur name to each poem.


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« Reply #77 on: May 27 2006, 04:08 am »
A Lost Friend
On the way back, there a Dark Parade,
A funeral of a beloved friend.
I cried and cried,
For a friend meant everything to me.

Once before she did said,
“Whatever the sadness dive in you,
You mustn’t toss yourself in utter darknessâ€
But is really a miracle if someone can cries without sadness?

But now a month since the scent happened,
Her face still clear in my mind.
To bear it up the sadness,
Wanted to be forget, but couldn’t be forgotten.

As well I still alive,
Your existence are meant everything to me,
And everything I’ll keep it up,
Until we meet again in Grace.


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« Reply #78 on: May 27 2006, 04:10 am »
Kuri-san what is a really good poem. It tells the story really well. I'm sorry for your friend
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« Reply #79 on: May 27 2006, 04:24 am »
Yeah, that was really heartfelt... Our condolences.