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Re: Runaway
« Reply #20 on: May 20 2006, 01:29 pm »
Quote from: Arcademan on May 20 2006, 01:27 pm
Also to add...having the doctor come out and say that Sakura 'survived' the surgery...you may want to re-phrase that comment. For some reason, that statement sounds a bit cold. Perhaps something more subtle to describe the moment may work better...like 'Sakura's surgery went well and I believe she will pull through.' or something similar to that. After all, doctors are suppose to install comfort in their words as well as medical aid.

Ah, thank you. Let's just say I've have a bad history with doctors. I'll change that. Thank you for pointing that out.
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Re: Runaway
« Reply #21 on: July 05 2006, 12:47 pm »
Excellent chapter, moezy-chan. Look forward to seeing more :)
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« Reply #22 on: July 07 2006, 12:48 pm »
Thank you so much Arcademan. I should have the next chapter up soon. I give it 1-2 weeks this time. I'm inspired enough to do it.
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Re: Runaway
« Reply #23 on: July 13 2006, 05:40 am »
*Starts crying*
OMG, SSSAAAKKKUUURRRAA :cry:

It is a great chapter, moezy-chan. I can't wait until the next one.
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Re: Runaway
« Reply #24 on: July 13 2006, 06:15 am »
nice story :)
looking forward to read more!
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