Thanks for the translations, but there are few things that might need to be fixed..
This is minor but Yuuko says that the the seal on the right eye is "breaking"... as it is in process of being broken, rather than already broken completely. Same with FWR, he says the right eye's power is "disappearing".
skip to the part where FWR is explaining the clones....
pg 18 should be like this:
FWR: I tried to take out the right eye,
FWR: But as expected from one of Clow's bloodline,
FWR: If I try to take out the eye by stuffing it with magic,
FWR: The clone will break as well (along with the eye)
FWR: A clone that has same strength as the original
FWR: Is not something that can be created many times
FWR: Besides
FWR: Even if another's heart resides in him,
FWR: If the goal of gathering feathers is not changed, it did not matter.
FWR: That's why I released him that way
page19
FWR: Reading the time
FWR: reading the place
FWR: The clone goes to Clow Country (the rest of that bubble is very good... much better than what I would have come up with)
FWR: Everything was going just as planned
pg 18 is the only one with somewhat major change... the rest are just minor stuff that can be ignored
Awesome job on translation ^_^ I was working on one too and yours was worded so much better than mine....