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Re: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
« Reply #80 on: May 27 2006, 05:44 am »
Well the second finish in a hour. :keke:

Home Sweet Home
From the track I moved,
There always leaved out a trace.
As far I know, I’m getting nearer and nearer,
To the place I called “Home”

Its been a fore year I didn’t meet up my beloved,
Liked my body had lost the warmth of my family.
A warmth that can’t be traded with gold.

As I down from the track,
A sandy wind come across me,
It feel like it shows welcome to me.
Just like an old memories.

As far I could see,
There lied an old house,
Later on, I reached up there,
My parent comes out and hugged me.

There long they hugged,
The warmth of being my heat,
It become a trinity to become,
The one we called ”Love

Before I could say my word,
Fighting with my tiredness,
The first thing I should say is
              “I’m Home”

Somehow, in the P4, there a meaning i wanted to show but here showed like not the same as my thought, sorry.


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« Reply #81 on: June 10 2006, 02:39 am »
Kuri-san, its really good. Here is one, I just just made up

Google
I google myself
I google my friend
I google my cat
I google your name

I google my pop
I google my pic
I google my book
I google all day

I can't live with out my google
Day or night
If you ask me, what I think of google
you may get a fright
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Re: Lets here your POEMS!!! hehe :D
« Reply #82 on: June 11 2006, 03:04 am »
Here's one I did for a class. my teacher gave each of us an adjective and an intangible noun. Then we had to write poetry on our 2 words. I got Oily and Faith.
many of my poems are political, so this is what came out.

Oily Faith

A tainted god,
A greasy guise of beliefs,
Polished by politics.
Then, consecrated by so-called churches.
So smooth and silver-tongued
The serpent whispers in my ear,
“Bite this apple of faith,
Or you shall die, I fear.”
His words oily and rotten,
Leave trails,
Of ideals forgotten.
I refuse the apple.
Not because I took a look
In a holy book;
But because I have
Faith.
All my own.
Not oiled to a heavenly sheen;
But home grown,
In the garden of my mind.
Away from the detrimental presidential potential
And the chained chorus of churches
Fashioned favorably by forefathers.
Faith is between people
And to whom they prey.
NOT
Oiled;
By the greasy fingers,
Of man.
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« Reply #83 on: June 16 2006, 11:42 pm »
razeasha, that was a cool poem..

Ok, here is one I made like 5 minutes ago. I'm too lazy to make it better, lol  ;D

Falling into nothing

Why do i feel the way I do
like nothing in life matters.

I though I was here for a reason
but I learn, I was here for none.

Every day, I looked out side
finding that I'm all alone.

The sun is too bright
the night is to dark.

My eyes are blinding
I can't see where I'm going

I fall to the ground,
with no one catching me.

I guess I will die right here and now
with no one knowing where I am.

Then, I feel something close to me
I look up, to see a hand.

Maybe i'm not alone.
Maybe there is someone out there.

Who came to my rescue
when I lying there.

But I know now
that I'm not alone.
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« Reply #84 on: June 19 2006, 01:46 pm »
sad story

you lift my hand
but i took it away
you smiled at me
but i didn't smile back
i think again
who's my prince
while you were right next to me
i didn't notice
but now that you're gone
i realized
the Sad love story
we ever had
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« Reply #85 on: July 13 2006, 06:57 am »
hack.<3.fly that was a great poem

ok, here is one that I made. Its has to deal with a story I made. I was trying to get something to go with it, and this is what I got. And the person falling is a guy. He is the main character in my book......

Darkness I follow in

When their nothing to do, and nothing to say, will be stay by me for ever long. We may not always agree but I will love you until the day I died and beon.  But their are somethings I can not say. For this, I must say, just leave, please, please.

Don't worry about me, don't come to me. Stay away from me and save your self. I don't want my fear to over come you like it has with me. Just stay away, Just stay away from me

Even though I told you so, you still come up to me. Why do you do this to me. I"m falling from nothing into the darkness that will swallow me up inside. Just leave me alone.....just leave me alone

As time goes by, I go father into the darkness. No one knows and seems to notice. But when I look at you, I feel as though I can get out, but I feel something dragging me down, and down

The darkness is so cold and loney. As I look up, to see the light fading away. I put my head down, as the cries go away, I know its my time to go. Why does every thing seem to happen to me, just to me

I can no longer hear the cries of me, or the light that was once above me. I can no longer move a muscle in my body, or cry a little tear. Is this it for me. Is my time up already. It seems like yesterday, I was child with a dream, but now its been broken, into many pieces

I close my eyes to allow me to stop. This is too much for me. I can no longer rememory my past or why I'm even here. Was this where I'm supose to be. Was this who I was all the time. Then I voice goes though my mind. It can't be, can it.

I raise my head to see a bright light. The voice is so familier, like I heard it tons before. Then I see a hand coming towards me. I take my hand and raise it up. As my hand is holding hers, she help me stand up. I look around, I heard a voice saying that I"m not alone, i'm not alone

The darkness around goes away, and the light shines all around me. I get a feeling that I never felt before. Its hard to explain, but it feels like a million people is standing right there with me, even though there is no one there. What is this feeling I feel....is it what I've been looking for.....I think it is.

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« Reply #86 on: July 15 2006, 07:40 am »
I wrote this poem when I couldn't sleep one night and crazy things were running through my head.

Death
The tears fall
Never ending
So much pain
Never stopping
All her love
Completely wasted
Every kind deed
Never repayed
She died that day
So unfulfilled
So lonely
Her death was in vain
What a shame
Her gravestone sits there
Never seen, never touched, never loved
Just like her

well there you have it. The creepy things I think up at night.

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« Reply #87 on: July 22 2006, 11:23 pm »
A random thought...

Random Hearts IV

Perishable is my body now
And battered by all this strain.
God, I need strength badly.
Over time, I traveled and traveled
Desperately yet going nowhere.

Now I stand at the crossroads,
At the crossroads where no one has tread upon.

Ah, now I feel so tired,
Kneeling before Fate for mercy.
Oblivion awaits me
….

Ah, worthless.

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« Reply #88 on: July 22 2006, 11:54 pm »
Mine's more of a paragraph, I can't seem to think of anything else to add to it!
The Silver Kiss
A kiss that send me to pure bliss,
I sure am going to miss,
Your love, your silver kiss.

The original poem is better, but I can't find it.  :sweatdrop: I wrote it when I was reading 'The Silver Kiss'.

Embrace and kiss me
My feelings of falling in love with you is never ending
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« Reply #89 on: July 31 2006, 08:40 am »
some fu***ng old poem.. that i wrote when i was a little down

sorry

i'm sorry..

i'm sorry for being useless
i'm sorry for being so stupid
i'm sorry for being a waste of money
i'm sorry for letting you always down

i'm really really sorry
for being the reason that steve died..
and it caused you lot of pain mom
you missed him everyday
and cried for him everynight
you thought that nobody listed you
but i heard you all the time
when you thought i was sleeping..
and cried in silent with you

i'm sorry cuz because of my acts
many people get hurts..
dearest people to me..died..

and i'm sorry you are reading this..
but i think..i couldn't handle anything anymore
I screamed..but nobody heard me
i cried..but nobody whiped my tears
i feared..but nobody huged me
i needed..but nobody was with me..
i'm sorry you are reading this..
hope you could forgive me...and understand..
but maybe..this is the best..
so shall i say..god bye..
and i beg..for a forgiveness..

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another one that i wrote when i was thinking about my current crush =/ *sigh*

Looking his smile from from a distant place
admiring his eyes where they can't reach me
dreaming how his hair must smell
and how warm his skin would be

He's everything
i'm nothing
that's how different we are
and he will never be my side
that's what aches my heart

all i want to see is his smile
mesmerized by his charm
maybe that's the only thing that keeps me alive

but i wish i were the reason of that bright smile..
and all i can do is dreaming about him smiling for me
been happy because of me
but those are just dreams after all..
like pumpkins changing to carriages..
they will never become true
and that makes a hole in my heart


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« Reply #90 on: August 03 2006, 07:44 am »
Forever:

You are the one I love
The one who holds my heaven high above
As i stare upon your face
My world sems a pitiful disgrace
For your beauty i would sacrafise all
For your love my heart would fall
And in the stars it shall come true
Only there, just me and you

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« Reply #91 on: August 03 2006, 09:19 am »
^aww that's so cute ^^
it just remember a manga i read cuz it says similar things =P

Kuri-san, its really good. Here is one, I just just made up

Google
I google myself
I google my friend
I google my cat
I google your name

I google my pop
I google my pic
I google my book
I google all day

I can't live with out my google
Day or night
If you ask me, what I think of google
you may get a fright

hehe i must say it's funny *giggles*


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« Reply #92 on: August 10 2006, 04:48 pm »
My poems are a little dark and short, I made them for a school project, so bear with me.

I Used To Be

I used to be
A small lantern
Lighting a small room
Now I am
A broken heap of glass
Hurting all who come near.
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