Volume 16

[Sandra-chan]

Thank for the pic Xiao_Lang! I've been searching for a bigger version of that cover.

[Renaya]

guessing for the character for volume 17 deluxe cover..??

either Subaru or Fuuma.....is FWR even possible?

[Sailor Yue-chan]

guessing for the character for volume 17 deluxe cover..??

either Subaru or Fuuma.....is FWR even possible?

putting that fat freak on the cover will frighten the little kids XD. besides, he's an OC for TRC, so he's out of the question

[Renaya]

putting that fat freak on the cover will frighten the little kids XD. besides, he's an OC for TRC, so he's out of the question

OC..? original character..?but Kurogane and Fai are original TRC too amd they are on.....ahaha likewise, I don't want him on the cover as well, but who knows ...^_^
(yay..my 300th post)

[Dayanira]

Just look at that! There were some changes in vol 16! Some cool changes
http://evercool.livejournal.com/222450.html#cutid1

[nefadol]

Just look at that! There were some changes in vol 16! Some cool changes
http://evercool.livejournal.com/222450.html#cutid1

There's more than just that, Kamui's eyes are changed in a lot of the panels.  Actually, both panels I'm using as examples look like they were redrawn.



Originals on the left side.  I think I actually prefer Kamui's original expression in the scene where he's talking ot Fai, kinda changes his whole attitude about what he's saying.  At least Subaru looks a little less girly in that full body shot when he first appears, proper shading does him wonders.  Although he still looks extremely feminine in the frame where he's talking to Sakura. XD



...and the flashback scenes when Kuro is talking about Fai changing are different as well...



There's probably more, they really did change quite a bit.

[Emiko]

Just look at that! There were some changes in vol 16! Some cool changes
http://evercool.livejournal.com/222450.html#cutid1

Whoa! Cool new Fai shot. And the pages with Kuro and Kakyou were awesome.

[Airashii]

Ohh, Fai looks so hot in these new scenes! Kawaii!

[Sailor Yue-chan]

ZOMG. 2 full shots of fai, INCLUDING a full page O_O *hugles new pages*
definaltyu gonna add them to the msn group

...and the flashback scenes when Kuro is talking about Fai changing are different as well...

they changed the scene where mokona asked about him using magic...that changes the feeling sort of by putting the pfiffle world there insted :S

[nefadol]

they changed the scene where mokona asked about him using magic...that changes the feeling sort of by putting the pfiffle world there insted :S

During that conversation they were having in Piffle, Fai had been talking about how the kids had changed, to which Kurogane made a comment about how Fai had changed as well.  It actually fits in with the context of what Kurogane is saying to the clone.

[Sailor Yue-chan]

i guess. anyways, with fai using his magic, ONLY the pictures have been changed right? no lost or added dialoge?

[nefadol]

It looks the same to me for the most part, although there are a few line changes that were pointed out in Evercool's LJ...

Dialog changes...hmm. Chapter 125 Kurogane's line "Is there any way to save him?" changed to "Is there any way to stop him from dying?" (why change the line? o_O; and Fai got a few new lines too. Just a "dame" here and there + some minor alterations that I noticed though. ("Syaoran-kun" before Fai jumped into the water changed to "This is no good... Syaoran-kun!") I have no idea WHY the changes were made, honestly. What, did they have bad grammar before? XD;

I haven't thoroughly gone through it, but basically it's just the added scene with Fai's magic, Kurogane and Kakyou running to the basement and Kakyou telling him he can't take his sword with him (explains what happened to the sword...), and Kamui's eyes and shading in the scenes I pointed out in my other post.

Changed and added scenes:



I grayscaled and leveled them, so they look better than they did before, in case anybody wants the new and altered scenes for something.

[Renaya]

hey......Kurogane leave the sword outside before he's entering underground with Kakyou right?? and on the later chapters, Mokona can surprisingly get  a hold of it.. (when Kurogane asked mokona for sword, but instead C!Syao sword came out)..I mean...how..?teleport..?one of 108 Secret Techniques...

So far, this volume has a lot of changes and addition compare to others , is it?

[Sailor Yue-chan]

hey......Kurogane leave the sword outside before he's entering underground with Kakyou right?? and on the later chapters, Mokona can surprisingly get a hold of it.. (when Kurogane asked mokona for sword, but instead C!Syao sword came out)..I mean...how..?teleport..?one of 108 Secret Techniques...

So far, this volume has a lot of changes and addition compare to others , is it?

pergaps summoning?''[[

whats being said btw kakyou and kurogane in that added scene?

[su_chan]

"Is there any way to save him?" changed to "Is there any way to stop him from dying?" (why change the line? o_O;

It is not the same, 'saving' him was too 'unespecific' for Yuuko, you know, she grants wishes, but Fay can't be saved from himself, from his own pain by Yuuko, or at least that was not what Kurogane and Mokona wished then. That is why the line was changed, Kuro's wish was him not dying, his 'soul' is another matter that he will have to solve in another way 

[nefadol]

pergaps summoning?''[[

whats being said btw kakyou and kurogane in that added scene?

Explanation here.

I replaced Evercool's "Bob" with "Kakyou" as she forgot his name. XD

Kakyou is explaining the barrier collapse and how they saw this in their dream. Kurogane wants to know what's going on but Kakyou says the dreams don't show everything, only hints. Then Kakyou goes on to talk about the danger ahead and says the people that came with Kurogane are right in the center of it. Basically we get two new chapters of "IMPENDING DOOM" for added effect XD

So there you go, Kakyou is being his typical "I know the future but I can't do diddly squat about it" ala X.

[Sailor Yue-chan]

ah. intersting...but i cant add the pages to msn w/out an exact translation ^^;;;

[SEMP]

ah. intersting...but i cant add the pages to msn w/out an exact translation ^^;;;

this is the translation for the page 88

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The barrier protecting the Government has disapeared

it looks like something happened at the underground water tank

what's that something

i don't know, becouse i can't see everything on dreams

and this for the page where kurogane leaves the sword

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but everyone is there

the people who came with you too....

it's here, right?

it's not permited, if you carry a weapon you can't get inside.

[Sailor Yue-chan]

cool thanks ^_^ *cookie*

[SEMP]

cool thanks ^_^ *cookie*

Thank you!!! my first cookie...