I think it's a very good review. If this had been one of the first volyme, I'd say you were a bit too much on the critical side to encourage others to read it, but as it concerns volyme 8-10, it feels more like a welcome break from the usual rambling of a starry-eyed fan (which we are all, more or the less). The synopsis is excellently written and your language is intelligent without being stiff, however, at the last section, the sentence It’s nice to finally see Sakura being a little bit cool sticks out for some reason - I'm not sure why, really. Perhaps it's the "little" that seems unnecessary, or maybe "cool" is somewhat too informal to fit in the text, but either way, I dislike that sentence. Not that it's much to do about it now, and besides, it's simply a matter of personal taste. Overall I think it's great! I hope we'll get to see more reviews from you in the future.