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My KuroFay fanart

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Airashii:
Cool fan art!

Kazuki:
So... I tried to draw another Tsubasa fanart... This time I used backgroud (yeeey!) but I suck when it comes to do the line art -____-

Well, anyway... Here it is...

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b190/angeldust_/tsubasabeach.jpg

Ando:
Aww, a day off with the family! Looks very warm and nice. You know, there's something about your artworks that make me sit and stare at them for ages - I think it's how you do faces; they turn out so expressful.

Their heads are still a bit too big, especially that of Kurogane, and Fai's arm resting on the other man should not be able to bend like that. Remember he is supposed to have a bone there. Furthermore, light coming from behind (the sun, that is) is doubtlessly the most difficult of light sources to draw, and although your shading isn't bad, you might want to consider putting most of the light in the outlines of Fai's hair, instead of drawing shines all around his head. However, considering this scene takes place in the middle of a sunny day, it's not that big a problem.

The background is okay, though I'm not too sure what those white things in the ocean are supposed to be - clouds? Maybe putting some glitter on the water surface would be a good idea; water reflects a lot of light, after all. I see how you wanted to fit Mokona under Fai's arm, but she (yeah, I will stick with "she" from now on) ends up looking very flat and weird, perhaps you could have placed her on Sakura's shoulder instead? Oh, and Syaoran and Sakura in the background are absolutely adorable!

Arcademan:
Please use the existing TRC Picture Thread for posting fanfic pictures of the series. That's what it's there for. Thank You.

Sakaki:
I don't think the TRC picture thread is really for posting up a CW member's artwork. Most of what is on that thread is either official art, or wallpapers and art found at other sites, not usually work done by CW members. Or maybe it's a little bit of everything?

People have always been encouraged to make their own art topic here in the Fan Creations section to receive feedback though.

Kazuki: I like Kuro's expression, and Syaoran being led blindfolded in the background is amusing. ^^

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