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The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy - Syaoran's Evil!
« on: April 14 2005, 04:01 am »
I've writing a trilogy at the moment, called the Shadowy Secrets Trilogy! The first story should be added to fanfiction.net in a couple of days (or weeks...) under RubyChan05.

It actually has Syaoran turning evil after being possessed by the Evil Card, and then the second story will focus on how he's being pulled in one direction by his love for Sakura, and the other direction by the darkness within him...

I love this story! And as far as I know, the plot seems to be original - I haven't been able to find a Syaoran turns evil fic anywhere on the net! I had to use the american dub names though...all those spellings were giving me a headache.

What do you guys think....if I put this up, would you read it?
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Re: My Fanfiction - The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy
« Reply #1 on: April 16 2005, 08:38 pm »
Ruby Chan, if  you login into your account, then click on stats: http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/stat.php

then you can get the links to your stories.
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Re: My Fanfiction - The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy
« Reply #2 on: April 16 2005, 09:03 pm »
Thanks, SLi! Ok, this should link to The Evil Within You....tell me if it doesn't work.

www.fanfiction.net/s/2353356/1/
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Re: My Fanfiction - The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy
« Reply #3 on: April 16 2005, 09:07 pm »
Writings good, even though I would prefer the Japanese names.

Good story start so-far

-I even gave  you your first review :D
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Re: My Fanfiction - The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy
« Reply #4 on: April 17 2005, 02:46 am »
SLi, you are the best! Thanx so much!
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Re: My Fanfiction - The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy
« Reply #5 on: April 17 2005, 07:15 am »
hey, lady, that was good! i loved the way you show the reader syaoran's good side, because he's really a sweetie.  :)
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Re: My Fanfiction - The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy
« Reply #6 on: April 17 2005, 07:19 am »
Thanx! I'll be putting the rest of the chapters up over the next couple of days...I'm already halfway through the second story....
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Re: My Fanfiction - The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy
« Reply #7 on: April 17 2005, 07:25 am »
cool! i'll be waiting! but... i only type up my stories and never really send them, but... how do you send your stories in to the site?
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Re: My Fanfiction - The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy
« Reply #8 on: April 17 2005, 07:29 am »
I created a user account on fanfic.net, waited three days for it to activate, then followed the instructions I found in the Read Me First file
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Re: My Fanfiction - The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy
« Reply #9 on: April 17 2005, 07:34 am »
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Re: My Fanfiction - The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy
« Reply #10 on: April 17 2005, 11:33 pm »
Completed! The first story of the trilogy is now complete!

in case ur lazy, and don't want to look 4 da link again....

www.fanfiction.net/s/2353356/1/
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Re: The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy - Syaoran's Evil!
« Reply #11 on: April 24 2005, 05:34 am »
Aww the ending was so cute!!!
I loved it! Great job!
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Re: The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy - Syaoran's Evil!
« Reply #12 on: April 24 2005, 08:53 am »
Wow, i totally love it, great job!!!!^o^ :hello2: :hello2:
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Re: The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy - Syaoran's Evil!
« Reply #13 on: April 24 2005, 01:50 pm »
Amazing story! I loved it a lot! You're a great author, Ruby Chan. Keep up the good work :okay:
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Re: The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy - Syaoran's Evil!
« Reply #14 on: April 25 2005, 02:15 am »
Thanx u guys! I'm putting up the second installment now, so if u just follow the link you can read the first chapter of Dark Potential. This will be updated less often, as I'm still writing it at the moment, and I'm studying for my first GCSE at the moment.....
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Re: The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy - Syaoran's Evil!
« Reply #15 on: May 01 2005, 12:48 am »
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2365149/1/

Yippee! The first two chapters are now up! Take a look!

Don't be disappointed by the lack of magic in these chapters, they're really menat to introduce the story.


NEW: The third chapter is now up - the main story begins!
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Re: The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy - Syaoran's Evil!
« Reply #16 on: May 31 2005, 11:13 pm »
The 6th and 7th chapters will be uploaded as soon as Fanfiction.net's sevrers stop getting overloaded...sigh.

Please keep reading this fic if you have been, or try it out. If you haven't read the first installment yet, check it out!

This trilogy is focusing more on Syaoran at the moment, but S+S Fans should hang in there! Loads of gooey romance in the fianl set of chapters for the second installment, and then a whole third installement of it!

EDIT: Chapters 6 and 7 are finally uploaded! If you're reading it, please comment here and/or give me a review on the site! They keep me going!
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Re: The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy - Syaoran's Evil!
« Reply #17 on: June 16 2005, 06:52 am »
i just read all chapters!!  :noteworthy:

its so impressive! while im reading it, i can visualise it as a real CCS episode or as a CCS movie..

yeah, like SLi said before.. i prefer their Japanese names.. and was wondering why even Meilin was calling Showron as Li? i thought she usually calls him by his first name?

keep up the great work!  :okay:
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Re: The Shadowy Secrets Trilogy - Syaoran's Evil!
« Reply #18 on: June 16 2005, 07:30 am »
hehe.. i read the "Dark Potential" as well..

well written.. the "Big Four" a.k.a "Dark Monarchs" kinda reminds me of Naruto; Orochimaru's "Sound Four".. very very dark story about Syaoran becoming the baddie.. *sobs* feels weird but its refreshing as well!

sigh, at Chapter 7, Tomoyo fallen out with Sakura.. *i just felt sad reading it..*

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