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The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« on: May 15 2005, 07:34 pm »
The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
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I wrote this ages and ages ago. It was really my masterpiece of CCS fanfiction. No one ever flamed it and they all said that they loved it. I'm sorry if the plot or anything is a little dodgie. But bare in mind that I was eleven and twelve when I wrote this. I've even read it through myself, so I can remember what I wrote! I'm planning to write the sequel, I've already got chapter 1. Fanfiction.net seems to be having problems, I'll have to report it soon...

Anyway, here's the link to the story:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1380441/1/

The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
Raiting: PG-13 (T)
Chapters: 13
Pairings: S+S, M+E

Blog: Shh... okay it's a secret, but Meiling has a diary and... She's willing to share it with you. Just come inside. Understand feelings you never thought Meiling had.

My comments: The story is about Meiling and her thoughts. My goal with this story was to teach the 'Mei-Bashers' that she's a human being just like everyone else, with feelings.The story is 'partly' a romance between Meiling Li and Eriol Hiiragizawa. The M+E is vitle to the story. Some of the story is based on the growing friendship and love between Eriol and Meiling. I handled it with the best care I could provide! So don't knock it! Meiling also discovers great powers, and tragic secrets about her family! If you're a fan of Syaoran Li, then the stories finally should truely excite you... Or so says CSF! lol!

My final quote: Just cause it isn't E+T, don't dimiss it! They aren't a real couple either!

Please read it! I worked very, very hard on this all those years ago! I made sure this story got finished too! This isn't your run of the mill, 'I'll finish it one day' story. This is proper stuff! I couldn't wait to start writing chapters for this story. I managed to get pages done in one day. I worked into the night!!!!

^_^ Sorry! Please enjoy it!
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #1 on: May 16 2005, 01:26 am »
very nice :keke:
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #2 on: May 16 2005, 02:22 am »
Thank you! ^_^
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #3 on: May 16 2005, 07:48 am »
Will read it later :D

(and even though I'm not fond of any coupling other then E+T I'll read it )
and just a note to readers no bashing because somebody doesn't like E+T

Off-topic cardwitch: are you planning to upate Merodi's Story anytime soon? I quite like that one :D
« Last Edit: May 16 2005, 10:17 am by SLi »
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #4 on: May 16 2005, 09:12 pm »
Never mind about the last question, got my answer at the footnote on the last chapter.

About the story:

Very well done, I noticed several grammatical & spelling errors, rather minor but I noticed anyway.
The story is very well written as is your others. Writing a story is hard-enough, but writing in first person has to be even more difficult.
Keep up the good work :D

Get well soon, until then will I wait patiently for the sequel and for updates to Merodi's story :)
« Last Edit: May 24 2005, 10:08 am by SLi »
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #5 on: June 02 2005, 06:48 am »
i loved it!   cardwitch ^_^
               
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #6 on: June 05 2005, 10:31 pm »
Thank you! I'm really glad that you like it!  :keke:
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #7 on: June 05 2005, 10:35 pm »
I'll think I read Merodi's story again shortly - its been a long time since I last did :D
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #8 on: June 07 2005, 03:50 pm »
OMG!! I LOVED THAT SOOO MUCH I started reading it a hour and a half ago and I couldn't stop and its late here but I don't care!!! I should tell you Meiling is my favorite character! I even named my cat for her. I loved that so so much. sorry but thats all I can think to say!! and the ending was perfect!! I love those bittersweet cliffhanger endings!!! you should change the names and make it your own story! I'm going to make my friends read it! seriously...oh I'm all gigly. I'm know I'm acting like a spaz but that was the best meiling fanfic I've ever read (and hey its late) ok well I'm gonna go before I embaress myself anymore.
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #9 on: June 08 2005, 03:37 am »
Oh my! I'm blushing at that! Thank you very, very, very, very, very, very much! In fact, though it's only a try-out currently, I have published the sequel on ff.net ^_^

Have a look here... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2408887/1/

Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much ^_^ I'm sooooooooooooooooooooo happy you like it!
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #10 on: June 08 2005, 04:14 am »
YAY! a sequel, I'll start reading it right away!
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #11 on: June 09 2005, 02:59 am »
Thank you ^_^

I'd love to hear what you think. I've been working on the plot line for what seems like ever!
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #12 on: June 09 2005, 07:26 pm »
heh i finished the first part.... looking good man
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #13 on: June 12 2005, 08:51 pm »
Thank you!
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #14 on: June 17 2005, 02:05 am »
i loved it all!! the sequel and the first one!!
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #15 on: June 21 2005, 07:36 am »
that was good!!!! u realli r talented!!!
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #16 on: June 28 2005, 05:57 pm »
Wow!  i Loved it  it was soooooo Good!  I must read it again *runs off and starts too read*
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #17 on: July 09 2005, 09:40 am »
Good story, I like it. ^^
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #18 on: August 16 2005, 11:16 am »
WOW! I'm so flattered! I mean... that story was like my masterpiece. Cause I wrote it when I was twelve and I remember how proud I was of it again. Thanks everyone! Knowing you all like it makes my day!
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #19 on: August 16 2005, 11:18 am »
Wow! Great Story!  :)
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #20 on: August 16 2005, 11:19 am »
It was very good, I particulaly like the writing style. Thier aren't many nicely written stories out that (people are just lazy with with grammer/spelling/spacing I think)

Off-topic: I asked this before, but didn't get an answer :sweatdrop:, Cardwitch are you planning to finish Merodi's Story anytime?
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #21 on: August 16 2005, 09:48 pm »
It really does flatter me that you think my story is good stuff. It was the only story I'm fully proud of and that I'm happy to have finished (I'm also happy that everyone who reviewed it said they liked it). All of you agreeing with them makes me feel like I'm not wasting my time writing and that people enjoy my strories for what they are and not the coupling (Christmas Wonders got some flames for being M+E. That's why took it down and uploaded it again). I'm currently planning to have a huge update day when I upload a new chapter for the sequel and a few other stories too.

I took it down so I could completly re-do it over. I have five chapters ready to be sent out, but I want to get ten done before I get on the movie. Cause my stories broken into three parts, each part has ten chapters. I need to finsish, erm series 1, if you will before I'll feel happy. I lost a lot of my chapters in a virus so I've had to re-write most of it.

For those who don't know: Merodi Li is my character. She is the only daughter of Syaoran Li and Sakura Kinomoto. She has a twin brother Akio Li, and they all live in Hong-Kong. In this story, Tomoyo is a single mother with a daughter, Kimi. Meiling is a single mother with two daughters, Yuri and Heidi (she had son by he supposedly died at birth) and Eriol visits from England every now and then to freak everyone out...

It's a little bit of a drama story, and the end is very sad, but I know where it's going finally! Woo-hoo!
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #22 on: August 16 2005, 09:52 pm »
Thanks for update, looking forward to it.

Could I get them when you are ready too?
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #23 on: August 16 2005, 09:56 pm »
Sure, if you want.
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #24 on: August 16 2005, 09:59 pm »
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Sure, if you want.

I'll PM you with my e-mail if you wish.
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #25 on: August 17 2005, 02:02 am »
Great story Cardwith! I can't wait for your next one!  :okay:
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #26 on: August 18 2005, 07:56 am »
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Great story Cardwith! I can't wait for your next one!

Thank you, I try hard to please!

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I'll PM you with my e-mail if you wish.

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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #27 on: May 22 2006, 11:40 am »
Wow!! Great story both ways! I loved it your a great writer. Oh and could you plz write down the link to that story of Merodi Li Cause its sounds great!!!
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #28 on: May 22 2006, 11:42 am »
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Re: The Secret Diary of Meiling Li
« Reply #29 on: May 26 2006, 04:28 pm »
THx so much Sli!!!  :noteworthy: Will read immediatly!!!   :greengrin:
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Friend:" You do know that your not sopposed to read magna for your reading list?"
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    Art teacher(with german/french accent)" NO!!! No Anime eyes! I hate them! Make recular eyes on your kite!"
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