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Title: Fall - S&S Fanfiction
Post by: Miss Jenni-Maie on April 07 2005, 12:45 pm: Warning...kinda dark in a few parts.
It's in Syaorans P.O.V.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2296578/1/
If you're confused about what Sakura is talking about in the flashback. I plan to do a little "Sequal" one shot of her telling Syaoran what she meant. It'll be less dark, and kinda cute...I'm hoping :tongue3:

This was originally a story I had to do for an English assignment. It was originally only 500 words, but it sucked, so I "filled it in", so to speak. My english teacher said if I brushed up on my writing skills I might have been able to publish some of my works . . . woah. Never thought I'd ever hear a positive comment from a teacher ever.

But blah, I'm rambling, just go read it!
Comment please?
Title: Re: Fall - S&S Fan fiction
Post by: D.J.P on April 08 2005, 04:22 pm: it was an alright story, nicely written with no obvious spelling or grammar mistakes (that I saw or wasn't looking hard enough)

overall, nice job :)
Title: Re: Fall - S&S Fanfiction
Post by: Miss Jenni-Maie on April 08 2005, 04:25 pm: :happy4: Thank-you very much!
I look forward to the next chapter in your story! :noteworthy:
Title: Re: Fall - S&S Fanfiction
Post by: Li_shaoran on April 09 2005, 12:20 pm: I really liked it :D i really dont know why you dont want to add more to it....you definately should =D
Title: Re: Fall - S&S Fanfiction
Post by: Miss Jenni-Maie on April 09 2005, 12:28 pm: Well, I do plan to add a little bit more to it. I more or less just said that so I don't get people sending me emails going "WHY?!?!! Add more or I'll kill you!" Haha, I had that happen once....wasn't sure if it was a joke or not :confused:
But it'll just be a tiny sequal explaining what Sakura was talking about in that little flashback.
It'll be more fluff, instead of "Oh lets go kill myself" drama.
But yay! I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Re: Fall - S&S Fanfiction
Post by: lumizstar on April 10 2005, 02:46 pm: I'm going to read it rite now...*clicks on the link* I just adore ur stories... :inlove:
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Post by: Okamirei on April 10 2005, 02:50 pm: I love it X3!
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Post by: lumizstar on April 10 2005, 03:21 pm: Me too!!! Ani is so pro in writting fanfics
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Post by: ani on April 10 2005, 09:12 pm: gwah... :D i liked your story endoh!
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Post by: Zeldi on April 14 2005, 11:21 pm: Love it :D
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Post by: Miss Jenni-Maie on April 16 2005, 07:17 am: Thank-you so much everyone!!! :surprised: I didn't think anyone would like it!!
Title: Re: Fall - S&S Fanfiction
Post by: cblossom on April 18 2005, 12:33 pm: U must be nuts if u thought no one would like it. It was really good, awsome!
Title: Re: Fall - S&S Fanfiction
Post by: Miss Jenni-Maie on April 18 2005, 01:04 pm: Well, I am nuts!!
Thank-you very much!
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Post by: Xiao Ying on May 28 2005, 02:01 am: waaii.. XD hanyaan!! ^_^ nice work!! weeee~ *flies away*
Title: Re: Fall - S&S Fanfiction
Post by: Moon on July 27 2005, 04:21 pm: I loved this one-shot. Sad... but, very sweet at the same time. I can't wait until you write the tiny little "sequal" to it. ^__^;
Title: Re: Fall - S&S Fanfiction
Post by: Miss Jenni-Maie on July 28 2005, 12:27 pm: Holy crap! I forgot about that!
Hhaa, I'll get working on that!
Thanks for the reminder!
Cookie!
Title: Re: Fall - S&S Fanfiction
Post by: Moon on July 28 2005, 12:36 pm: Gasp! ^^;; Thank you!! *huggles cookie*