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ok, i looked all over this place for a thread where people can post their poetry, and if I put it here and there is already one please let me know xD but here is one of my most recent poems hopw you like it!!!
P.S. oh and I want everyone who writes poetry to us your work!!! I love meeting fellow poets ^^
Broken in Time
I have fallen, only took time
I contenplate the meaning
the reason for this pain
only to realize its my own mistakes
I continue to move backward
knowing not what I have lost
never knowing, never caring
what my mistakes would eventually cost
shadowed with the pain
I see myself broken
my soul shattering
untill I no longer realize
who and what I am
I fall deeper in the darkness
reaching for the light
he grabs my hand and pulls me through
my mind racing in all directions
I've come to understand my worthless soul
my sins hiding who I'm really meant to be
masking my heart and mind
my aura bringing upon darkness
to those i've come to despise
hatred within my heart
eating away at what i used to be
i feel as though I have no choice
I continue to fail and fall deeper
my broken wings giving no support
searching for God
looking for comfort
wanting to heal from all the pain
feeling it grow stronger
eachtime I reach forward
I see the light ahead of me
as part of my broken spirit
wanting so much more
accepting the pain and sinful nature
my selfish desire to belong
finding the one to help me through
I continue to search
and bring my soul to know peace
as I try to mend the pain
the pain my heart has come to realize
only broken in time.
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:keke: Wow, Starpheonix-chan, you're poetry is awesome! Very deep... Umm... I like to write poetry, too, umm.... :sweatdrop: I'll post it later...
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bah, I tried to comment earlier but my PC died on me :(
Anyway, I was saying, I really liked it!
I don't normally read poems but sometimes I do feel like it and I do like yours, Although admittidly it is rather sad but what I like about it, Is to me I can see some hope in there aswell.
I like how it's written too, there are a few grammatical errors, but they don't show easily. Good Job :D
I did two pieces of Poetry (Only one of them I like) but I wrote them last year.
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oh wow thank you both for the comment ^^ hehe here is another one I wrote, most of them revovle around my feelings, not really othe people but here it is!! oh and I have a ton more, i write poetry all the time so let me know if you want me to post some of my others ^^
“Shadowed Emotionsâ€
You push me away
Blocking how I feel for you
Ignoring how and what I do
You say you care for me
And will be by my side
But yet you push me away
Your emotions are what you hide
I continue to struggle
With everything I am
Only wishing I could end this pain
Wanting you near me
Side by side
As one, just you and I
I want to let you go
Forever burdened with the love I feel
My emotions hurting others
I look forward to the future
In hopes that we could someday
Follow the same path
Walk together hand in hand
But I continue to think
Maybe my selfish desire
Would only cause pain for others
Including the one I love
So I've made up my mind
To walk by your side
And support you through the hard times
Even if we are not one
Just being your friend is worth the pain
I don’t want to lose you in the end
Never wanting us to part
And lead separate lives.
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I really like your poetry, Starpheonix-chan! You should write a book!  :keke: I would like to see your other ones...
 :sweatdrop: I'm working on one now for a school project, when I finish it, I'll post it here....
It's titled "As Time Goes By..."
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I am interested in seeing your poetry ^^ here is one I did for school, it was for a book called "To kill a mockingbird" here it is:
"Mirror of Darkness"
(To Kill a Mockingbird)
A hatred so deep, consuming our core being
spreading beyond to tose around us
we continue to move forward living in darkness
not knowing the fate that lies ahead
pushing what we know to be the truth away
we no longer realize the fate we have come to inherit
blaming the ones cursing their very existance
pointing fingers in the other direction
to those we consider not worthy
we go blinded by the influence of others
they become the fuel to our darkend path
we go unnoticed to even ourselves
we will soon come to realize our significant mistakes
our fate will bring fourth the truth and understanding
it will flash before our minds, far to late to change
but the ones we truely hate are infact ourselves
(P.S. ok sorry for all the spelling errors xD)
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Another great poem! If you ever make a book, tell me! I would definitely buy one! :keke:
Ok, here's mine... :sweatdrop: It's kinda simple though...
As Time goes On... I had to change the title to make it fit...
As time goes on
and seasons change
as months go by
and the weeks end
Thru winter's change
Past summer's rain
The years slowly past us by....
As time goes by
and the earth begins to age
though water still resides here
the leaves blow away
Thru autumn's change
and the new life spring brings
as time goes on...
As hope keeps us going
and faith keeps us still
as time goes on...
:sweatdrop: So many errors here...
I'll post my other ones soon...
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Starphoenix, wishingstarx, both of you have written nice poems. I should try to give you some constructive criticism as I know how important receiving such is in order to develop as an artist, but I cannot think of too much at the moment, except that you should fix (the however few) spelling errors that occour in your texts, as that highly will improve the look of professonalism.
Starphoenix, about your Shadowed Emotions... In the beginning, you mention how the loved one of the poem's narrator is rejecting his/her feelings for said person, but the rest of the poem deals only with the narrator's emotions. Not that that is wrong, but if I were you, I should consider developing this person's feelings or maybe rewrite the first seven lines.
wishingstarx: I may be reading it the wrong way, but to me it seems that the first half of your As time goes on has a rhythm to it, whereas the following half lacks that (or maybe has a whole other rhythm). Is that intentional?
I am only trying to help, so please don't get upset or take it personally, and most important, if you don't like my suggestions and think I am totally off track, you should ignore them, as it is, after all, your poem.
I too will contribute with a little something to this nice thread. It is one of the most recent of my works and I first intended it to rhyme, but that did not work out very well. Feel free to criticise, offer suggestions or whatever, I will be happy for your help.
He comes to my house in the hour of wolves
Concealed by the wild roses’ shadows
Silent as water on nights with no wind
But I am awake and awaiting
“Hush, my beloved, say not a word
Just open thy window for me
None but the moon will behold this our tryst
And I shall be gone ere the dawnâ€
He speaks of the darkness and people he’s killed
Thus making me tremble with fright
Singing me songs of his ardour for death
A bloodthirsty lover I’ve got
“A beauteous creature thou art, little lamb
“Thy fears whet my hunger, dear boyâ€
He whispers to me and then kisses my neck
My memory’s blank after that
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Starphoenix, wishingstarx, both of you have written nice poems. I should try to give you some constructive criticism as I know how important receiving such is in order to develop as an artist, but I cannot think of too much at the moment, except that you should fix (the however few) spelling errors that occour in your texts, as that highly will improve the look of professonalism.
Starphoenix, about your Shadowed Emotions... In the beginning, you mention how the loved one of the poem's narrator is rejecting his/her feelings for said person, but the rest of the poem deals only with the narrator's emotions. Not that that is wrong, but if I were you, I should consider developing this person's feelings or maybe rewrite the first seven lines.
wishingstarx: I may be reading it the wrong way, but to me it seems that the first half of your As time goes on has a rhythm to it, whereas the following half lacks that (or maybe has a whole other rhythm). Is that intentional?
I am only trying to help, so please don't get upset or take it personally, and most important, if you don't like my suggestions and think I am totally off track, you should ignore them, as it is, after all, your poem.
I too will contribute with a little something to this nice thread. It is one of the most recent of my works and I first intended it to rhyme, but that did not work out very well. Feel free to criticise, offer suggestions or whatever, I will be happy for your help.
He comes to my house in the hour of wolves
Concealed by the wild roses’ shadows
Silent as water on nights with no wind
But I am awake and awaiting
“Hush, my beloved, say not a word
Just open thy window for me
None but the moon will behold this our tryst
And I shall be gone ere the dawnâ€
He speaks of the darkness and people he’s killed
Thus making me tremble with fright
Singing me songs of his ardour for death
A bloodthirsty lover I’ve got
“A beauteous creature thou art, little lamb
“Thy fears whet my hunger, dear boyâ€
He whispers to me and then kisses my neck
My memory’s blank after that
Hey thanks for the advice, I shall try and revise it ^^ and post the finished version again soon thanks so much!!!
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Starphoenix, wishingstarx, both of you have written nice poems. I should try to give you some constructive criticism as I know how important receiving such is in order to develop as an artist, but I cannot think of too much at the moment, except that you should fix (the however few) spelling errors that occour in your texts, as that highly will improve the look of professonalism.
Starphoenix, about your Shadowed Emotions... In the beginning, you mention how the loved one of the poem's narrator is rejecting his/her feelings for said person, but the rest of the poem deals only with the narrator's emotions. Not that that is wrong, but if I were you, I should consider developing this person's feelings or maybe rewrite the first seven lines.
wishingstarx: I may be reading it the wrong way, but to me it seems that the first half of your As time goes on has a rhythm to it, whereas the following half lacks that (or maybe has a whole other rhythm). Is that intentional?
I am only trying to help, so please don't get upset or take it personally, and most important, if you don't like my suggestions and think I am totally off track, you should ignore them, as it is, after all, your poem.
I too will contribute with a little something to this nice thread. It is one of the most recent of my works and I first intended it to rhyme, but that did not work out very well. Feel free to criticise, offer suggestions or whatever, I will be happy for your help.
He comes to my house in the hour of wolves
Concealed by the wild roses’ shadows
Silent as water on nights with no wind
But I am awake and awaiting
“Hush, my beloved, say not a word
Just open thy window for me
None but the moon will behold this our tryst
And I shall be gone ere the dawnâ€
He speaks of the darkness and people he’s killed
Thus making me tremble with fright
Singing me songs of his ardour for death
A bloodthirsty lover I’ve got
“A beauteous creature thou art, little lamb
“Thy fears whet my hunger, dear boyâ€
He whispers to me and then kisses my neck
My memory’s blank after that
Okay, cool! Arigato, thanks for the advise! I see what you mean... I'll probably play around with it a little more, then I'll post up the finished version soon...
Umm.. Ando, I think your poem is okay...very mysterious and dark... It's kinda scary, but that's just me...You're very talented, too...
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Wah, cool... I didn't know a lot of people here are interested in poetry. Well then, I'd like to post a poem of mine, which I wrote a long time ago in college...
Song of the Wanderer
Nowhere to go, no place to stay,
I have no idea where to go today.
Though my purpose in life I cannot comprehend,
I must walk in life’s crossroads ‘till the very end.
My tears are my food; my sword is my friend,
My only companion is a heart I can lend.
My weary soul finds rest only in the night
For darkness has been my eternal light.
The places I see, the people I meet,
The foes that attack me yet in the end bleed,
The dangers that lie at the road’s bend….
All these I experience; when shall it end?
The seasons that pass, the time that flies by,
All these I experience when in my solitude I cry.
My bloodstained hands are dirtied of guilt
Like a blade that plunges through my soul to the hilt.
A weary voice, an aching soul, a suffering heart,
These in my journey they never part.
My loneliness is slowly killing me,
Yet despite all these, this is my destiny.
When shall I finally give out my best?
When shall my weary heart find peace and rest?
When will my soul find comfort and ease?
When will my pain and suffering cease?
Yet this journey in life I must continue
For already deep in my heart I knew,
My Calvary shall end, my loneliness shall cease,
Soon I shall find my comfort and peace.
Nowhere to go, no place to stay,
I have no idea where to go today.
Though my purpose in life I cannot comprehend,
I must walk in life’s crossroads ‘till the very end….
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Wah, cool... I didn't know a lot of people here are interested in poetry. Well then, I'd like to post a poem of mine, which I wrote a long time ago in college...
Song of the Wanderer
Nowhere to go, no place to stay,
I have no idea where to go today.
Though my purpose in life I cannot comprehend,
I must walk in life’s crossroads ‘till the very end.
My tears are my food; my sword is my friend,
My only companion is a heart I can lend.
My weary soul finds rest only in the night
For darkness has been my eternal light.
The places I see, the people I meet,
The foes that attack me yet in the end bleed,
The dangers that lie at the road’s bend….
All these I experience; when shall it end?
The seasons that pass, the time that flies by,
All these I experience when in my solitude I cry.
My bloodstained hands are dirtied of guilt
Like a blade that plunges through my soul to the hilt.
A weary voice, an aching soul, a suffering heart,
These in my journey they never part.
My loneliness is slowly killing me,
Yet despite all these, this is my destiny.
When shall I finally give out my best?
When shall my weary heart find peace and rest?
When will my soul find comfort and ease?
When will my pain and suffering cease?
Yet this journey in life I must continue
For already deep in my heart I knew,
My Calvary shall end, my loneliness shall cease,
Soon I shall find my comfort and peace.
Nowhere to go, no place to stay,
I have no idea where to go today.
Though my purpose in life I cannot comprehend,
I must walk in life’s crossroads ‘till the very end….
Wow, Tenkouken, it's a very good poem...
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Wah, cool... I didn't know a lot of people here are interested in poetry. Well then, I'd like to post a poem of mine, which I wrote a long time ago in college...
Song of the Wanderer
Nowhere to go, no place to stay,
I have no idea where to go today.
Though my purpose in life I cannot comprehend,
I must walk in life’s crossroads ‘till the very end.
My tears are my food; my sword is my friend,
My only companion is a heart I can lend.
My weary soul finds rest only in the night
For darkness has been my eternal light.
The places I see, the people I meet,
The foes that attack me yet in the end bleed,
The dangers that lie at the road’s bend….
All these I experience; when shall it end?
The seasons that pass, the time that flies by,
All these I experience when in my solitude I cry.
My bloodstained hands are dirtied of guilt
Like a blade that plunges through my soul to the hilt.
A weary voice, an aching soul, a suffering heart,
These in my journey they never part.
My loneliness is slowly killing me,
Yet despite all these, this is my destiny.
When shall I finally give out my best?
When shall my weary heart find peace and rest?
When will my soul find comfort and ease?
When will my pain and suffering cease?
Yet this journey in life I must continue
For already deep in my heart I knew,
My Calvary shall end, my loneliness shall cease,
Soon I shall find my comfort and peace.
Nowhere to go, no place to stay,
I have no idea where to go today.
Though my purpose in life I cannot comprehend,
I must walk in life’s crossroads ‘till the very end….
Oh my...... thats very good, i'm suddenly inspired to write again!! w00t yay thank you ::bows::
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Thanks! It's a really old poem, but I never thought it still has its magic...
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Ok here is another poem, i dont really like this one or the way it came out, but let me know what you think kay!!! ^^
"Only Deisre"
Our selfish dreams brought on by desire overwhelming the heart
bringing fourth suffering within our soul such a beautiful reality
thinking toward the future, destroying each other
erasing the lives of those we deemed so valuable
but yet we move forward still dreaming of what we lack the darknesswithin slowly growing stronger
eating away at who we really are
those around us are too consumed withing temptation to notice what
they've become we go unnoticed and continue to fall deeper within
our selfish minds and yet we dream on moving forward
not noticing what lies ahead only to be disappointed
no way to turn back as we reach our fatal future
the future that our fagile dreams have caused
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haha... wow a lot of good poem stayed here. i did also made up a plan of making up this poem, and now this poem still lack of good vocaburary... i need all your support in changes in this poem! ^^
------The Lake------
once a while there was a nature lake
.. lied inside the forest
.. a virgin lake thy called..
there fill with astounding type of fishes..
can be eaten either cant be eaten...
Later.. the place was corrupted with human..
everyday a fish will be caught up..
divide the fish tastiness..
the bad taste shall be thrown back to lake..
leaving a scar of the hook..
bleeding and bleeding inward lake......
Thus, the greed of humanity shall never end...
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Once there was a man on the lake-side..
wait and wait for the fish to eat his bait...
but,he never caught a fish before..
when a fish near his bait...
he will scared out the fish to escape..
nearby man laugh at him...
"U'll never catch a fish like this!" they laugh..
he stand up his word and said...
"I'll never hurt the innocent fishes, i will catch a fish that i only choose"
so.... he waited and waited.....
for the fish he truly wanted to take his bait....
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no, i really like it, it has a very different feel to it than most poems ^^ keep it the way it is, the lack of grammer and vocabulary is what makes it unique I love it!!! <3 Good work Light-san
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no, i really like it, it has a very different feel to it than most poems ^^ keep it the way it is, the lack of grammer and vocabulary is what makes it unique I love it!!! <3 Good work Light-san
*agrees with Starpheonix-chan...* It's awesome the way it is... ^_^
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whatever it be, Thanks for encouraged me! :cry: sob* I had never recieved such good-welcoming by anyone before. But now i feel more better, hontoni~arigato gozaimasu~ ^^
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yes your welcome, art is art, and I think each piece of art from someone els is special regardless of what critics say, yea there is things you could improve on, but I would never compare you to anyone els, you are unique and art from everyone is special ^^
<---- would make a good critic LOL!!
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hmm.. you are a good poem reader. I *bow* shall respect you. :noteworthy: it really one in the thousand whom can really appriciate poem, really.. just like The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost. this poem looked meaningless when harshly see.. but in the inner poem, there got a point in your Life-decision.
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yes I agree ^^ I only wish more critics would see it that way, i got in a big fight with a 30 year old woman on dA www.deviantart.com about how she was going about being a critic all wrong -. - adults ::sighs::
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hihi :D don't mind that. may think them is among the ignorances in Poetry
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Here's one of my poems; it's pretty old:
Invisible:
She walks the crowded streets
And yet no one sees her
A lonely girl that the world forgot
Wanting to be seen
And wanting to be ignored
All in the same moment
Carrying her invisible burden
Upon her fragile back
Gathering strength
Though it seems hopeless
A question she repeats,
"Will I ever be seen?"
I wrote this poem back when I was fighting depression.
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awww I really like it!!! that is how I feel sometimes it can relate to most of us, very nice job!!!
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Woah, Â :) nice poem too moezy-chan. it really a good point inside that. :noteworthy:
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woww...they're all really good...
xD the poems i make are usually limericks..looool.
Once there was a girl named clover
who really liked to play red rover
she played by herself
with her good friend, the shelf
and then she got splinters all over.
ahahaha....: :sweatdrop:
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in matter of life and death
we always fear
of many dangers near
we live for life
we die of death
and we shout "why?"
nah, mine doesn't really make sense but it's about why people live -_-;;
p.s. wow , you guys'Â are amazing
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haha... :D please dont mind that. I really appriciate any poem, even its short or long.. hihi.. :) hack.<3.fly, your's poem not bad at all.. ^^ trust me.. I also a poem reader. and to charcoalz, your's not bad either. ^^ haha... I really looking forward to copy all of this maded poem..
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arigatou lightdecentant-san
i really love urs too
since im all- poems reader ^^;;
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haha... needless to say thanks to me. because I also need someone to gives idea about some changes in my Poem.. my poem is just a scratch. so a lot of wrong spelling or vocabulary... :hehe:
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Here's another poem I made in college, during an early morning class. My university, by the way, sits on top of part of a mountain, so...
Mist
I enveloped the universe in my arms
Amidst the cold rainy morning.
I sought warmth in the freezing wind
And got drenched in the rain
As I brood over the screams of nature.
The songs keep ringing in my head,
Songs that anger the heavens
And summon torrents of rain.
Little that I realized
That I am not alone,
For the wind longs for me
And the rain welcomes my presence.
Heaven slowly throws its blanket on me
And only then did I realize
That the universe has enveloped me in its arms.
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whoa.. :D pretty nice your poem.. no wander it was an University level.. :noteworthy:
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awww very nice!!! hehe and i especially like the limericks you guys put up ^^ they are quite funny xD
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I feel inspired all over again! I'd like to write more poems...
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haha :D I really looking forward to it..^^
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Tenkouken, that is really good xD
and kuri-san, arigatou! =)
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yes everyone here is very good ima write some more too ^^
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Here's another one of my older poems. I'm going to post one a day in chronological order starting from oldest to newest:
Jealousy
Her anger arises
Everytime they're together
She claims to be happy
But then why does she cry?
It's hard to contain all these emotions
But she'll do it anyways
It's all she knows
And it's all she lives for
She doesn't understand
And doubts she ever will
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haha :D all are pretty good in poem, <highlighting the poem and copy paste on notebook>
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Standing alone, in the pouring rain,
her heart quickens and feels pain
she closes her eyes and whispers his name,
will she ever love like this again?
it was over and done,
even before she started to run,
with the necklace clutched tightly to her chest,
fate had taken care of all the rest.
She felt the swift movement of someone behind her,
turning around, she softly smiled.
This poem in untitled, but I really like it. It was inspired by an unfinished story my sister wrote. I have a lot more ideas for poems, so I'll probably be posting here a lot. My cousin tells me to write one-shots and drabbles when I have writer's block, but I think poems are much easier and efficient for me. :D
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I really like that poem cherry-chan. I'm not good at poems. I never did well in that part of english class. My friend loves poems though. She is a nut when it comes to it. Not me though. Here is one of her favorite ones
A Love Like No Other
I never felt a love like this before
It’s a love like no other
Something I have always hoped for
A love with friendship
Humour and heart
A bond so strong
It would never part
A love that makes you smile
From ear to ear
A love that is joyful
Without any fear
A love that is beautiful
From the inside out
A love with no tears
Pain, or doubt
A love with soul
So tender and true
A love I have found
Only in you.
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oh my!! thats a very lovely poem cherry-chan ^^
and your poem ashlee is wonderful, its how I feel about someone, its perfect!!!
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Oh no. My friend made it. She made it after she started dating her bf, which is now ex bf.
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awww i"m sorry to hear that :(
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Nay, I hated the guy. I was just saying I like him to her, but really, he was a pain in the a**. I mean he broke up with her, and said "I though it was right at the time", he block her from msn and everthing. then I told her that he was on, and she said he is not, he not on mine. So, then he unblock her, and said, "There was too many people on my msn. so I had to block some people". He was a big a**
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Ex boyfriends are perfect for writing good poems and songs. A lot of music artists write their lyrics after a break-up :D Beautiful poem, though, Ashlee.
Best Friends
A smile, a promise,
someone I wanted to hold and kiss,
is my best friend, ever so true,
unknowing of my feelings, I wonder if he loves me too.
A hesitation, then I confess,
I think I've made our relationship a mess,
as he walks away from me, shaking his head,
I don't think I will see him again.
Here's another poem. It's about a girl who secretly loves her best friend, but when she tells him, she finds out he doesn't return her feelings. And he leaves, because he thinks she's a weirdo or something. I dunno, it came from the top of my head.
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Here is one that I have made. Now to warn you, I suc* at making poems. So please, be nice:
All I am
I am strong, but I am weak,
I'm loved, but I am hated,
I am smart, but I am dumb,
I have friends, but they are not true,
I have a heart, but it's turning blue,
I feel as though I will never know,
If this is all I am
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I like the poem, Ashlee! It's very well said :D
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Here is one that I have made. Now to warn you, I suc* at making poems. So please, be nice:
All I am
I am strong, but I am weak,
I'm loved, but I am hated,
I am smart, but I am dumb,
I have friends, but they are not true,
I have a heart, but it's turning blue,
I feel as though I will never know,
If this is all I am
Yup, it's very simple but the description of the self is very well-expressed.
I wish more would post their poems and other literary works soon.
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ok here is a new poem i came up with, i dedicated it to Josh the love of my life ^^ please be critical and let me know what you think!!! <3
"Like no Other"
(Dedicated to Josh Goodspeed)
You reached for me
Pulled me from the dark
Showed me love and compassion
Set free my soul and heart
Our separate paths
Now moving one direction
Hoping to conform one day
Offering our soul’s protection
I love the way you smile
The way you touch my face
The way you kiss my cheek softly
The way you hold me with such grace
Everything about you
So perfect in every way
The words all mixed up in my heart
Not knowing how or what to say
I love you like no other
More than words can say
I think of you and smile
Loving each and every day
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~Namine~ I love that poem. Its so sweet. You must really like this guy josh.
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~Namine~ I love that poem. Its so sweet. You must really like this guy josh.
Yeah I do I think i'm in love with him ^^
here are some pictures of him w00t!!!
this one is of him and his dad he's the one on the left ^^
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a149/Shadowangel0687/xmas4.jpg)
this is one of him on his webcam when he first got his hair cute w00t!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a149/Shadowangel0687/webcamera.jpg)
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I'm happy for both of you. ^_^ I wish I had a guy like him. But my love life suc*s
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I'm happy for both of you. ^_^ I wish I had a guy like him. But my love life suc*s
you'll find someone sissy ^^ they are just going to fall into your lap oneday and its going to be awesome!!! i went through a lot of hard relationships and memorys but he bypasses them all he's perfect in every way!! ^^
::huggles her sissy close::
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you'll find someone sissy ^^ they are just going to fall into your lap oneday and its going to be awesome!!! i went through a lot of hard relationships and memorys but he bypasses them all he's perfect in every way!! ^^
::huggles her sissy close::
*hugs her back* Thanks big sis
Here is a poem, that I wrote. I wrote it a long time ago, so I was very young. It has to deal with my family. I'm more of a black sheep to them. But my mom does understand but not all of it. If you are wondering, my parents are divorce (over 7 years), and they just love my younger brothers a bit more then me.
Am I all alone
the darkness is coming closer and the light is fading away,
nothing can go on but the fear in my heart,
can any one see me, can any one hear me,
I guess I'm all-alone
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awww lil'sis its ok, I've been through some hard times too but you know what if you keep your head up and your heart strong you'll get through it, and when you do finally find someone you love they will help you too, in a lot of ways you dont know yet, you can make it!!!
oh and very nice poem ::claps::
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*blushes* thank-you
I know that life offers so much more. My past only made me stronger, or weaker, I don't know yet, I have to see ^_^
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ok heres a poem I wrote for my love Josh ^^
"Like no Other"
(Dedicated to Josh Goodspeed)
You reached for me
Pulled me from the dark
Showed me love and compassion
Set free my soul and heart
Our separate paths
Now moving one direction
Hoping to conform one day
Offering our soul’s protection
I love the way you smile
The way you touch my face
The way you kiss my cheek softly
The way you hold me with such grace
Everything about you
So perfect in every way
The words all mixed up in my heart
Not knowing how or what to say
I love you like no other
More than words can say
I think of you and smile
Loving each and every day
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Good job little sis. I love it ^_^
Where here is another one I did. Just now. It sucks, ya I know, but I hope you get a couple of laughs from it, lol
Computer Screen
I'm sitting in front of this open screen
with nothing to do, but type.
Why I am here?
Why are you there?
little questions that goes though my mind.
My heart drop when you are not online,
and pops right back when you are on
Come to me, come and see,
and I will show you who I really am.
Why are you there, when I'm right here?
Oh please, oh please talk to me.
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Here's a random thought....
Writing Poetry On An Empty Stomach
Hungry.
No food in the ref
Or even at the cupboard.
Forgot to eat my meals.
Nothing much to eat around.
I scavenge around for a decent meal,
But ouch, no money.
What to do?
I sit before the monitor
Waiting, waiting, waiting.
Still hungry.
Getting cranky and hollow
And brain-dead by the minute.
Tomorrow, hard day,
Might end up surviving with no food.
Now I have to stay awake
And think of something
Before my stomach kills me.
I still sit before the monitor
Waiting, waiting, waiting.
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Hm...I don't think this would count as fanart, but I have a Tsubasa poem I wrote a long time ago by my rainy window pane and I really like it.
Wait a Bit For Me
I sit by a darkened window
A star flits by in the evening sky, but I make no wish.
Because though the window becomes a prison for me, someday...!
I'll stretch my memories out to you and we'll fly away, away.
I hope you'll wait a bit for me, because I've longed for so long to say those three words.
I. Love. You.
But raindrops fall, and salt scented wind blows my dreams back and forth.
But I'll wait a bit for it to calm.
Oh, that I could remember now, those three words.
You look so expectant, so warm.
Who. Are. You?
I shed a single raindrop soaked tear, and my window grows darker still.
Are you still waiting for me? I will. Always.
Oh, those three words. I know, know I love you.
I. Miss. You.
But can you wait a bit for me?
Everyone else does such good poems...-sigh- I really liked it though, so I had to put it up.
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this one i wrote for mother's day:
your love
when i'm sad
when i'm lonly
you came to me and
spoke softly to me
you hugged me,
and tucked me to bed
i love you, mother,
i need you, everyday,
thank you God,
thank you mom
for giving me the most precious gift
your love.
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Let me give everyone a heads up, if its orignal poetry, not from Anime or another Movie poetry, do be wise that people will still your work, I am a published in many books and would like to tell people about this, and since this is a poems board, I will give a published one I did awhile back.
Day
As the nigth goes by, With the dimonds in the sky,
The Moon sets, The Sun rises,
The Day is already at depth,
Time goes by, With out a care,
The day is done, All is fare.
Its from memory, so it might be off a bit.
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they are so good, guys ^_^ alot better then my *points on another page*
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ok this poem is based off a drawing found here http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/29578358/
let me know what you think ^____^
"After the Rain"
when the rain falls
I shelter my emotions underneath
not wanting, not hearing
the wispers of love's calls
sheltered by my unknowing
hiding who I am
sharing only what I allow
pulling fourth what i'm not
I reached for you
shining so bright within my heart
compassion overwhelming my soul
not wanting or letting us fall apart
the rain slowly stops
showing me a wonderful reality
visions of what is meant to be
playing before my mind
compressing my hatred and desire
now showing our emotionless vitality
feeling it slowly fade down my cheek
the cool feeling of the breeze
I now realize what its like to feel
wanting more and more
the consequences of my past life
begin to fall deeper and deeper
within those dark places
I no longer wish to reach for
glancing ahead to my future
watching you pull me through
my soul now shining bright
as I face my new life with you
wanting so much more
than what i've gained or lost
thinking of my past
and what my future would cost
I'm slowly crawling through
breaking the barrier of my sinful nature
holding my emotions high
I try to overcome this darkend fear
noticing what its like
feeling the mood of what i've come to know
lonelieness in all its spite
I notice the good and accepting
as I realize my path
much clearer than before
only after the rain falls
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Once again namine. Its great. ^_^
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Here's my next poem; I never titled it.
At times, I find myself drifting
Out at sea, where no one can find me
Some days the wind is gracious
It carries me away to a distant island
Where I can finally be on solid ground
Other days, It is mean and unforgiving
Blasting storms and harsh winds
It's days like these when I wonder
Wonder if I should just fight back
Or allow the wind to carry me off
Where noone will ever find me
The wind has also been known to toy with me
It'll carry me off to the island, but drifting
Back to the sea
These are the days that are most frustrating
I wonder, Will I ever make it
To that distant island?
Or be doomed, to drift for eternity
This poem represents life and each element symblizes something. I'll leave it to you what they symbolize.
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moezy-chan, that is so good. I know how its feels in the poem. Its really good ^_^
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Arigatou. It's my favorite actually. That poem really helped me get my emotions out.
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Arigatou. It's my favorite actually. That poem really helped me get my emotions out.
I know how you feel. I posted this one earlier, but its kind of how I felt at the moment, well alot latey. Lets just say. There is alot going on between me and my family. I don't agree with what they are dinog. And I feel like a outcast.
Am I all alone
the darkness is coming closer and the light is fading away,
nothing can go on but the fear in my heart,
can any one see me, can any one hear me,
I guess I'm all-alone
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Here's my next poem; I never titled it.
At times, I find myself drifting
Out at sea, where no one can find me
Some days the wind is gracious
It carries me away to a distant island
Where I can finally be on solid ground
Other days, It is mean and unforgiving
Blasting storms and harsh winds
It's days like these when I wonder
Wonder if I should just fight back
Or allow the wind to carry me off
Where noone will ever find me
The wind has also been known to toy with me
It'll carry me off to the island, but drifting
Back to the sea
These are the days that are most frustrating
I wonder, Will I ever make it
To that distant island?
Or be doomed, to drift for eternity
This poem represents life and each element symblizes something. I'll leave it to you what they symbolize.
I really like this poem, moezy-chan... It's very deep... And I feel that way sometimes...
I know how you feel. I posted this one earlier, but its kind of how I felt at the moment, well alot latey. Lets just say. There is alot going on between me and my family. I don't agree with what they are dinog. And I feel like a outcast.
Am I all alone
the darkness is coming closer and the light is fading away,
nothing can go on but the fear in my heart,
can any one see me, can any one hear me,
I guess I'm all-alone
I like your poem, too, onee-san... I can relate to this one as well... ^_^
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I feel like I'm starting to lose my touch as far is writing or even deep thinking is concerned ....
Anyway I'm trying out what my teachers called form poetry....
Over A Cup of Coffee
Wake me up, wake me up, turn my
sleepiness into angst, turn your caffeine
spirit into the wraiths of the mind. Show
me how the heart beats fast through the
mixture of warmth and anger Keep me alive and
well, and aware of my existence. Give me no
sleep, awaken in me my slumbering powers,
as you keep your powers in your dark warm
sea. Let’s make ourselves comfortable, let’s
sit and talk awhile. You are restless, I am
wild; I feed on your warmth, you feed on
my mind. Ah, it feels good to be so
comforted. Join me, sit down. Wake me
up, wake me up, wake me up.
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Everyone's poetry here is so lovely! I really enjoyed reading it - if it was published in a book, it'd be the first poetry I'd buy for sure. Keep writing, all of you!
And here comes my crap... ^^;
This one's one of my latest ones, but I bet there are grammatical errors in it anyway. It was kinda written as song lyrics for some character in a story I never really started... Hm.
Pure and all-knowing
It seems like my heart is cheating me;
It says I’m feeling better than before,
The time you were still with me, but
You left me filled with emptiness
Was it all just a simple lie?
The arms you wrapped around me
A simple comforting phrase
Whispered in my ear?
My heart has grown wings
It fled from my body
I’m finally able to see the truth
I’m empty, I’m pure
I’m all-knowing
I was dragged along by feelings
Feelings I can’t trust, I know now
My heart stopped thinking
I rushed to be with you
I reached you at once
Then I stumbled over
Fell head over heels
And realized how you
Really were.
You left me without thinking
What you’d do to my heart
How my heart would be crunched,
Fold together like a piece of paper
With meaningless words.
My fled heart learnt this;
I know your silence
Meant more than words
Spoken in a moment
Of complete darkness.
How could I believe your words?
Everything you ever said
Was more than just a lie
It was like you had already torn
My heart apart with them.
My body is like an empty shell
My soul was torn out of it
Long before I realized it was gone
I already felt I was empty inside
Pure and all-knowing
Purity was in my heart
Even though it has gone
Purity has remained in me
And I know everything
How you betrayed me
Cheated on me
Left me in the end
And tore my heart away.
Your leaving has left one thing
Now I’m pure and all-knowing.
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^ Aw, don't worry... Grammar isn't really checked in poetry, especially if you're doing freeverse.
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Wrote a poem yesterday. I've had an onslaught of depression lately and from angst comes inspiration:
Myself
Often I wonder
What causes failure?
Why do people fail others?
And why do they not mind?
Is it from lack of emotion? Concern?
Or do they even know?
Are people so afraid of others?
That they insist on hurting them?
My belief is…
We need to be alone
We push away
So we can think of ourselves
And in that, we find comfort
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haha... it really been a while i didnt login in CWF and yet the number of the poetry are getting more..
**Can i take you all poem to published in my school magazine? i promise i'll writes all of ur name to each poem.
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A Lost Friend
On the way back, there a Dark Parade,
A funeral of a beloved friend.
I cried and cried,
For a friend meant everything to me.
Once before she did said,
“Whatever the sadness dive in you,
You mustn’t toss yourself in utter darknessâ€
But is really a miracle if someone can cries without sadness?
But now a month since the scent happened,
Her face still clear in my mind.
To bear it up the sadness,
Wanted to be forget, but couldn’t be forgotten.
As well I still alive,
Your existence are meant everything to me,
And everything I’ll keep it up,
Until we meet again in Grace.
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Kuri-san what is a really good poem. It tells the story really well. I'm sorry for your friend
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Yeah, that was really heartfelt... Our condolences.
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Well the second finish in a hour. :keke:
Home Sweet Home
From the track I moved,
There always leaved out a trace.
As far I know, I’m getting nearer and nearer,
To the place I called “Homeâ€
Its been a fore year I didn’t meet up my beloved,
Liked my body had lost the warmth of my family.
A warmth that can’t be traded with gold.
As I down from the track,
A sandy wind come across me,
It feel like it shows welcome to me.
Just like an old memories.
As far I could see,
There lied an old house,
Later on, I reached up there,
My parent comes out and hugged me.
There long they hugged,
The warmth of being my heat,
It become a trinity to become,
The one we called â€Loveâ€
Before I could say my word,
Fighting with my tiredness,
The first thing I should say is
“I’m Homeâ€
Somehow, in the P4, there a meaning i wanted to show but here showed like not the same as my thought, sorry.
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Kuri-san, its really good. Here is one, I just just made up
Google
I google myself
I google my friend
I google my cat
I google your name
I google my pop
I google my pic
I google my book
I google all day
I can't live with out my google
Day or night
If you ask me, what I think of google
you may get a fright
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Here's one I did for a class. my teacher gave each of us an adjective and an intangible noun. Then we had to write poetry on our 2 words. I got Oily and Faith.
many of my poems are political, so this is what came out.
Oily Faith
A tainted god,
A greasy guise of beliefs,
Polished by politics.
Then, consecrated by so-called churches.
So smooth and silver-tongued
The serpent whispers in my ear,
“Bite this apple of faith,
Or you shall die, I fear.â€
His words oily and rotten,
Leave trails,
Of ideals forgotten.
I refuse the apple.
Not because I took a look
In a holy book;
But because I have
Faith.
All my own.
Not oiled to a heavenly sheen;
But home grown,
In the garden of my mind.
Away from the detrimental presidential potential
And the chained chorus of churches
Fashioned favorably by forefathers.
Faith is between people
And to whom they prey.
NOT
Oiled;
By the greasy fingers,
Of man.
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razeasha, that was a cool poem..
Ok, here is one I made like 5 minutes ago. I'm too lazy to make it better, lol ;D
Falling into nothing
Why do i feel the way I do
like nothing in life matters.
I though I was here for a reason
but I learn, I was here for none.
Every day, I looked out side
finding that I'm all alone.
The sun is too bright
the night is to dark.
My eyes are blinding
I can't see where I'm going
I fall to the ground,
with no one catching me.
I guess I will die right here and now
with no one knowing where I am.
Then, I feel something close to me
I look up, to see a hand.
Maybe i'm not alone.
Maybe there is someone out there.
Who came to my rescue
when I lying there.
But I know now
that I'm not alone.
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sad story
you lift my hand
but i took it away
you smiled at me
but i didn't smile back
i think again
who's my prince
while you were right next to me
i didn't notice
but now that you're gone
i realized
the Sad love story
we ever had
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hack.<3.fly that was a great poem
ok, here is one that I made. Its has to deal with a story I made. I was trying to get something to go with it, and this is what I got. And the person falling is a guy. He is the main character in my book......
Darkness I follow in
When their nothing to do, and nothing to say, will be stay by me for ever long. We may not always agree but I will love you until the day I died and beon. But their are somethings I can not say. For this, I must say, just leave, please, please.
Don't worry about me, don't come to me. Stay away from me and save your self. I don't want my fear to over come you like it has with me. Just stay away, Just stay away from me
Even though I told you so, you still come up to me. Why do you do this to me. I"m falling from nothing into the darkness that will swallow me up inside. Just leave me alone.....just leave me alone
As time goes by, I go father into the darkness. No one knows and seems to notice. But when I look at you, I feel as though I can get out, but I feel something dragging me down, and down
The darkness is so cold and loney. As I look up, to see the light fading away. I put my head down, as the cries go away, I know its my time to go. Why does every thing seem to happen to me, just to me
I can no longer hear the cries of me, or the light that was once above me. I can no longer move a muscle in my body, or cry a little tear. Is this it for me. Is my time up already. It seems like yesterday, I was child with a dream, but now its been broken, into many pieces
I close my eyes to allow me to stop. This is too much for me. I can no longer rememory my past or why I'm even here. Was this where I'm supose to be. Was this who I was all the time. Then I voice goes though my mind. It can't be, can it.
I raise my head to see a bright light. The voice is so familier, like I heard it tons before. Then I see a hand coming towards me. I take my hand and raise it up. As my hand is holding hers, she help me stand up. I look around, I heard a voice saying that I"m not alone, i'm not alone
The darkness around goes away, and the light shines all around me. I get a feeling that I never felt before. Its hard to explain, but it feels like a million people is standing right there with me, even though there is no one there. What is this feeling I feel....is it what I've been looking for.....I think it is.
I hope you like it
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I wrote this poem when I couldn't sleep one night and crazy things were running through my head.
Death
The tears fall
Never ending
So much pain
Never stopping
All her love
Completely wasted
Every kind deed
Never repayed
She died that day
So unfulfilled
So lonely
Her death was in vain
What a shame
Her gravestone sits there
Never seen, never touched, never loved
Just like her
well there you have it. The creepy things I think up at night.
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A random thought...
Random Hearts IV
Perishable is my body now
And battered by all this strain.
God, I need strength badly.
Over time, I traveled and traveled
Desperately yet going nowhere.
Now I stand at the crossroads,
At the crossroads where no one has tread upon.
Ah, now I feel so tired,
Kneeling before Fate for mercy.
Oblivion awaits me
….
Ah, worthless.
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Mine's more of a paragraph, I can't seem to think of anything else to add to it!
The Silver Kiss
A kiss that send me to pure bliss,
I sure am going to miss,
Your love, your silver kiss.
The original poem is better, but I can't find it. :sweatdrop: I wrote it when I was reading 'The Silver Kiss'.
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some fu***ng old poem.. that i wrote when i was a little down
sorry
i'm sorry..
i'm sorry for being useless
i'm sorry for being so stupid
i'm sorry for being a waste of money
i'm sorry for letting you always down
i'm really really sorry
for being the reason that steve died..
and it caused you lot of pain mom
you missed him everyday
and cried for him everynight
you thought that nobody listed you
but i heard you all the time
when you thought i was sleeping..
and cried in silent with you
i'm sorry cuz because of my acts
many people get hurts..
dearest people to me..died..
and i'm sorry you are reading this..
but i think..i couldn't handle anything anymore
I screamed..but nobody heard me
i cried..but nobody whiped my tears
i feared..but nobody huged me
i needed..but nobody was with me..
i'm sorry you are reading this..
hope you could forgive me...and understand..
but maybe..this is the best..
so shall i say..god bye..
and i beg..for a forgiveness..
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another one that i wrote when i was thinking about my current crush =/ *sigh*
Looking his smile from from a distant place
admiring his eyes where they can't reach me
dreaming how his hair must smell
and how warm his skin would be
He's everything
i'm nothing
that's how different we are
and he will never be my side
that's what aches my heart
all i want to see is his smile
mesmerized by his charm
maybe that's the only thing that keeps me alive
but i wish i were the reason of that bright smile..
and all i can do is dreaming about him smiling for me
been happy because of me
but those are just dreams after all..
like pumpkins changing to carriages..
they will never become true
and that makes a hole in my heart
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Forever:
You are the one I love
The one who holds my heaven high above
As i stare upon your face
My world sems a pitiful disgrace
For your beauty i would sacrafise all
For your love my heart would fall
And in the stars it shall come true
Only there, just me and you
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^aww that's so cute ^^
it just remember a manga i read cuz it says similar things =P
Kuri-san, its really good. Here is one, I just just made up
Google
I google myself
I google my friend
I google my cat
I google your name
I google my pop
I google my pic
I google my book
I google all day
I can't live with out my google
Day or night
If you ask me, what I think of google
you may get a fright
hehe i must say it's funny *giggles*
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My poems are a little dark and short, I made them for a school project, so bear with me.
I Used To Be
I used to be
A small lantern
Lighting a small room
Now I am
A broken heap of glass
Hurting all who come near.