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Title: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Sya0ran on April 24 2005, 01:59 pm

Well...I wrote these in a span of 10 minutes.  XD  Yeah, I got inspired and just typed like crazy.  Hope you like them.  I'll be adding more as time goes.   :keke:

http://www.angelic-skies.net/CollectionOfTRCPoems.htm

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Pure Heart on April 25 2005, 01:54 am

oh, very intereing to read^o^
My favorite was the oen called kissed :haha:

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Lexi on April 25 2005, 07:21 am

Awww... All three of them were so sweet :inlove:  I probably love "Amber Eyes" and "Kissed" the most. For 10 minutes, they're all so great, Sya0ran :hehe:

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Sya0ran on April 25 2005, 07:51 am

Thanks to you both for the criticism.  ^^  o.o;  I just realized I put this thread in the wrong section.   :rotfl:   I'm an idiot!  Hopefully, LW, SLi or Limuiz-san can put this in the TRC discussion board.   :sweatdrop:  Sorry...>>;

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: cblossom on April 25 2005, 08:41 am

Those  poems r so sweet. I like them all. :D

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: D.J.P on April 25 2005, 09:13 am

Moved as requested

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Sya0ran on April 25 2005, 09:25 am

Thx Cblossom and SLi.   :D

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: kudan on April 25 2005, 08:46 pm

Nice, I wished I had talents like you...  :cry:  I'm never good with my language subjects.  :sad5:

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: last_memory on April 26 2005, 09:00 am

I liked them so much, specially the first one. Please make more!!

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Fai on April 26 2005, 10:42 am

I loved them!! XD Especially the 'Kissied' one  :okay:

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: gilly on April 26 2005, 04:29 pm

i love the last poem "kissed" so adorable!! ^_^ keep up the good work~

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: AiKo on April 26 2005, 04:42 pm

I wuv them all~ make some more if you have time ^_^

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: last_memory on April 28 2005, 08:44 am

Yeah, please!!  :noteworthy: :noteworthy:

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Zeldi on April 28 2005, 11:10 pm

Kawaii ^^

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Espo on April 30 2005, 09:59 pm

Aww ^^ pretty! Looking forward to more ~~

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: lumizstar on April 30 2005, 11:30 pm

They were very nice ^^ Keep up the good work.

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: ran-ran on May 09 2005, 02:03 am

they are gd! seems like u took way longer den 10 mins =)

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Xiao Ying on May 10 2005, 12:36 am

i love them all!! promise!! you did a REALLY great job on this one!

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Diemie on October 09 2005, 11:33 am

aw....i was hoping i can read it but the link doesnt work anymore  :cry:

Title: Re: Tsubasa Poems
Post by: Cherry-chan on October 09 2005, 11:38 am

yeah luvya is right... the link does work anymore... waaahhh Everyone says they're really good so I wanted to read them... booo.